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10/20/2014 c1 Mr.Anonymous01
You think you can do all fem akatsuki members because I think it would be a good read and an interesting pairing
10/20/2014 c1 Kaiju Fan
How about Fu?
10/20/2014 c1 Blazeknight26
glad to see your back
10/20/2014 c1 marco2o
Fricken konoha your a jerk. Thank you for the story please update soon it's pretty good. Thank you for the good job.
10/20/2014 c1 1Dage
That was very good also have you heard of kiseijuu or in English parasyte it's a pretty good manga that just got made into anime on October 8th. If you haven't heard of it then you should look it up it only has two episodes out so far but the first season is getting 24
10/20/2014 c1 eniox27
Awesome to hear from you again. Great start wonder what his com a powers will be. Love the pairing so far Um can you add fu and perhaps fem Garra their some of my favorites.
10/20/2014 c1 2I am the ultimate hybrid
Bravo! I'm glad ur riting again
10/20/2014 c1 genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam
nice
10/20/2014 c1 sakura89luis
Looking forward the next chapter.
10/20/2014 c1 coduss
good start, good list (especially love karui being the main girl, there arent enough of her)

suggestions:

Anko: honestly, without naruto she would kind of be the most hated person i the village. i just feel sorry for her that she's hated because of her asshole teacher, she deserves some kind of love

Fem Gaara: Gaara's life was shit, it would probably only be worse if he were a she. living a life completely alone, to the point of going mad and turning into a psychotic killer, that deserves something good happening to them in return
10/20/2014 c1 Guest
pls no gender bending i know this is fan fiction but its just weird love the start though
10/20/2014 c1 vitojoseph4
I suggest fem hidan, kakuza, and killer b.
10/20/2014 c1 Naruto Kuran
It's nice that you're back to writing history. Interesting story and add to the Harem Naruto Yugito nii, Fem obito uchiha, itachi Fem, Fem Sasuke.
10/20/2014 c1 1Jarjaxle
So you are back...Welcome...are you going to update rest of your stories? I seriously hope so. Frontlines Reboot and First Male Nin Reboot where left to hanging just when things were going interesting...especially in Frontlines.

So Naruto was tried to Murdered in Konoha. and that somewhat activated his Kekkei Genkai and erased Kurama? So he is going to be son of A and have Rapping Uncle Bee? XD this will get interesting
10/20/2014 c1 28Tremor230
YAY! A new story! I LOVE IT! XD welcome back between us Fanfictioners!
story sounds awesome and I am already curious about what the bloodline you gave him will do, being unable to feel pain is both good and evil, meaning that a lot of cool stuff will soon happen, I can't wait :)
Good job! I will follow this as I always followed your other stories.
Tr230 :)
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