
3/16/2017 c1 Guest
That sure was Jackunzel cuteness. I liked the writing and the whole thing in general. *clap clap clap*
That sure was Jackunzel cuteness. I liked the writing and the whole thing in general. *clap clap clap*
12/22/2014 c1
40Wxnderland
I'm seriously praying that this isn't a oneshot, It's so good! I really want to read more and see where this goes xD

I'm seriously praying that this isn't a oneshot, It's so good! I really want to read more and see where this goes xD
10/21/2014 c1 Kiki Frost
Something's weird with the last sentence. Can u fix that? Other than that it is interesting. I'm going to read some more! I love your work!
Something's weird with the last sentence. Can u fix that? Other than that it is interesting. I'm going to read some more! I love your work!
10/21/2014 c1 mermaidhuntress
Adorable! The bit at the end needs some cleaning up and finishing, but it was so cute! And your writing is very, very good.
Adorable! The bit at the end needs some cleaning up and finishing, but it was so cute! And your writing is very, very good.
10/21/2014 c1
31DivineSpiritual
I loved this. C: But the end...you might wanna reread it because it looked like it was cut off or something.

I loved this. C: But the end...you might wanna reread it because it looked like it was cut off or something.