for Keen Observations11/1/2015 c4 
47faithandhopewoman
Your chapters are quite interesting; you're very imaginative. I could never imagine that the children would engage in conversation with Elsa or that Rolf's family would come over for tea.
Makes me wonder how this story will proceed with the Anschluss looming.
47faithandhopewomanYour chapters are quite interesting; you're very imaginative. I could never imagine that the children would engage in conversation with Elsa or that Rolf's family would come over for tea.
Makes me wonder how this story will proceed with the Anschluss looming.
11/3/2014 c4 2som04
Another lovely up date, great work. Great ideas. Can't wait for your return come back soon.
:) :)
2som04Another lovely up date, great work. Great ideas. Can't wait for your return come back soon.
:) :)
11/3/2014 c4 manuelmusical14
That was a great job you put. I can easily picture them as deleted scenes
That was a great job you put. I can easily picture them as deleted scenes
10/22/2014 c1 Scot
Aw, a sweet scene between the sisters. I wouldn't know what it's like to have a sister - I'm one of five boys and I've only got brothers - but we do chat about our love lives.
Aw, a sweet scene between the sisters. I wouldn't know what it's like to have a sister - I'm one of five boys and I've only got brothers - but we do chat about our love lives.
10/22/2014 c3 manuelmusical14
That was actually very grand and intimate for you to write. Great job once again
That was actually very grand and intimate for you to write. Great job once again
10/21/2014 c1 manuelmusical14
Best thing you've ever done Janine. Your emotions are expressive and the essence of these classic characters shine through
Best thing you've ever done Janine. Your emotions are expressive and the essence of these classic characters shine through