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11/2/2014 c2 615bubbles
*sighs* I knew Sun would end up spoiling Metal if he was given free reign. After all, having someone available as a punching bag 24/7 is definitely too tempting to pass up.

I'm surprised Sun told Leaf, though. Adair maybe, to help out when Sun's too busy too, but I would have thought Sun would want to keep Metal all to himself. (*sweatdrops* Wait. That really does sound like a pairing. Sorry, Sun.)

Nice work on the story!
10/24/2014 c2 Fandoom-strikes
had me laughing out VERY loud !
really love it !
fav. and follow !

can't wait for the next chapter ,
isa
( my sister now hates you . I now woke her up times and it's 4 18 in the morning . she says that if I wake her up with ma laughter again shes gonna wreck my PC ... )
10/23/2014 c2 2Lazie Mie
I can see Adair take over Metal's mission, (am I right?) though it was weird for Sun not to heal Metal. And how did Leaf involved in the story? Or perhaps the most mysterious thing is how Metal is still alive after all the beating.
10/22/2014 c2 103Lucathia Rykatu
Ahhh, Judgment is so cute. Seriously, so so cute. Like, thinking about how confinement wouldn't be viable if Grisia could unlock doors. (And whoa, you updated already!)

Loved the conversation between Sun and Judgment near the beginning, and then, as Sun explained... haha, oh dear. (Sun, I don't think you even need to tell Roland. Isn't he part of the cold faction? Depending on when this story is set, he might already know...)

Adaaaaair. Adaaaaaaaaair. I just can't. XD; From your reply, I wondered if Adair had a hand in beating Metal... Ahhhh. (Sun doesn't think Adair told anyone else... Oh dear. Well, I hope Adair didn't tell Ed. XDDD)

But Metal! Beatings are supposed to only happen after you complete missions!
10/22/2014 c1 Lucathia Rykatu
I'm loving their interactions here, but I'm worried for Metal! Laica, too much of a good thing is never good! Grisia, show some restraint, and don't kill Metal! Metal is sounding a bit delirious...

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