for Shadow of the day4/8/2017 c20 Guest
Nice plot but it needs to have a beta and maybe a rewrite it looks great but she sounds like a mary sue it seems rush this story could better if if it had less flash back
Just saying good story i love this plot
Nice plot but it needs to have a beta and maybe a rewrite it looks great but she sounds like a mary sue it seems rush this story could better if if it had less flash back
Just saying good story i love this plot
7/14/2015 c13 Lord Nitro
So, Glitter's open about her feelings, Nightshade keeps it bottled up and Shadow has a blend. I can work with that :P
So, Glitter's open about her feelings, Nightshade keeps it bottled up and Shadow has a blend. I can work with that :P
4/10/2015 c20 
4The GalacticJester BubbleWitch
This chapter was short and completely epic! Can't wait to see what happens next.
4The GalacticJester BubbleWitchThis chapter was short and completely epic! Can't wait to see what happens next.
3/27/2015 c19 Eveningstar NMLR
Hi love this story check out my profile on quotev please
Hi love this story check out my profile on quotev please
1/7/2015 c16 4The GalacticJester BubbleWitch
This is good. I didn't think that I was going to see Random cry again, and now All I want to do is hug him! This also why I only love G1 Perceptor! Thank you.
4The GalacticJester BubbleWitchThis is good. I didn't think that I was going to see Random cry again, and now All I want to do is hug him! This also why I only love G1 Perceptor! Thank you.
12/30/2014 c15 Guest
This is brilliant! Why don't more people read this?! The GalacJesterBubbleWitch sigbing out, sorry can't sign in, at a liabary computer.
This is brilliant! Why don't more people read this?! The GalacJesterBubbleWitch sigbing out, sorry can't sign in, at a liabary computer.