for Carry on4/22/2020 c3 
2Oreo596
This was so cute! I wish the girl’s reactions and comments were at the end though too.
2Oreo596This was so cute! I wish the girl’s reactions and comments were at the end though too.
10/30/2014 c3 rosetigerlilly
Thank You! I will happily beg for another chapter to any of your stories any day. I loved it. I can't wait to see what new works of art you bring for me to enjoy.
Thank You! I will happily beg for another chapter to any of your stories any day. I loved it. I can't wait to see what new works of art you bring for me to enjoy.
10/29/2014 c2 11TropicalRemix
you should put the story in paragraphs. It is hard to read with everything all in one long paragraph.
11TropicalRemixyou should put the story in paragraphs. It is hard to read with everything all in one long paragraph.
10/29/2014 c2 rosetigerlilly
I'm a little late on reading this one. Sorry. I saw your blurb on Destiny's Gateway Facebook page and knew that I had to read! I have enjoyed it so much so far. I read both chapters tonight and can't wait until you post the third. I'm in no way criticizing your story as I am far from perfect in writing. I just hope that you will take your time in typing it. I've edited so many great stories and maybe that's why I'm picking up on the little things. I'm sorry if I come off as being rude. I do absolutely love the way your going with the story and hope that you churn out another chapter so I can see how the concert turns out and how the group takes her performance! Don't keep us waiting, please I'm begging you!
I'm a little late on reading this one. Sorry. I saw your blurb on Destiny's Gateway Facebook page and knew that I had to read! I have enjoyed it so much so far. I read both chapters tonight and can't wait until you post the third. I'm in no way criticizing your story as I am far from perfect in writing. I just hope that you will take your time in typing it. I've edited so many great stories and maybe that's why I'm picking up on the little things. I'm sorry if I come off as being rude. I do absolutely love the way your going with the story and hope that you churn out another chapter so I can see how the concert turns out and how the group takes her performance! Don't keep us waiting, please I'm begging you!
10/25/2014 c2 6Toonami4Ever
Lol at the end. Good chapter on this one and looking forward to the next
Have a great weekend
6Toonami4EverLol at the end. Good chapter on this one and looking forward to the next
Have a great weekend
10/24/2014 c1 SailorMoon489
This story is looking good! I really like it! Needs a little editing but its not that bad. Update soon please!
This story is looking good! I really like it! Needs a little editing but its not that bad. Update soon please!
10/24/2014 c1 6Toonami4Ever
Pretty great chapter to start the story off. Looking forward to seeing more of this in the coming weeks.
Have a great weekend
6Toonami4EverPretty great chapter to start the story off. Looking forward to seeing more of this in the coming weeks.
Have a great weekend