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8/4/2020 c5 Lovnag
Such a great work! I love how you managed to keep everyone in-character. Hopefully one day you will continue this.
Such a great work! I love how you managed to keep everyone in-character. Hopefully one day you will continue this.
8/13/2017 c5 Thunder Dragon
After rereading this story I still have to ask why haven't you updated this story? It shows so much potential! It takes an overdone premise of take Person A to Place B and see how they change things up but unlike the majority you keep the characters in, well character. This is good I would love to see more of this story! I were you I would take this story and make a few sequels that carry over to ChronoPhantasma and Central Fiction.
Now onto what I like. I like how Sayaka is gradually learning how to use her new powers and is getting stronger by getting her ass handed to her by training with Ragna. However their are people who are unaware of BlazeBlue's cannon and Madoka Magica's so you may need to make a chapter that covers both plots of each side of the crossover. Maybe when Torakaka gives Sayaka her lessons and when Rachel asks about Sayaka's world and her back story?
Now I have news Jubei is now playable in Central Fiction! That alone should give you motivation to get back on this story! Speaking of the old cat is Jubei going to help train Sayaka? That would be awesome as Jubei has to know something of Magic being married to Nine and also help iron out some of the flaws in her swordsmanship. Ragna seems to rely mostly on brute force and less on technique so their are openings to exploit in that style and Jubei could help iron them out and refine her style into something respectable. Also I am expecting Sayaka to eventually have a breakdown about her circumstances and the fact she is not entirely human anymore so Jubei and Ragna can help her out gett her head on straight.
Also can I make a request? I would love it if Sayaka and Kyoko's personalities were assimilated into on being with Sayaka being the dominant persona with her gaining Kyoko's traits and her powers added to her own. That would be cool! Also in the sequel it would rock if Sayaka also trained with Jubei along side Jin. That would be really cool! I just had another idea for Sayaka's powers! Seeing as we have one Magical Girl why not make Sayaka take the place of Platinum and take her Ars Armagus and gain her powers and having the personality of Trinity Glassfield as a mentor? That would be awesome as bumping off Platinum would be beneficial as she does not really give much in terms of the games story. However she has to learn Alchemy from Trinity(see Full Metal Alchemist) and grow even more powerful. She is going to need those powers to survive against what life is going to throw at her in the BlazeBlue world.
I also have another idea! Why not make her get an Idea Engine after facing a clone of Lambda using the Idea Engine and merging that with her new powers during the battle. But she has to train hard with Jubei so she can master those new powers and abilities. Also speaking which is Sayaka going to get all the powers that the rest of the BlazBlue cast have? That would be cool and allow here to stand up to some of the big dogs of the BlazBlue World.
I have one more idea for Sayaka if you want to use it. Make her have Aquakenisis befitting her new Fish Motif(See Princess Ruto in Hyrule Warriors)
After rereading this story I still have to ask why haven't you updated this story? It shows so much potential! It takes an overdone premise of take Person A to Place B and see how they change things up but unlike the majority you keep the characters in, well character. This is good I would love to see more of this story! I were you I would take this story and make a few sequels that carry over to ChronoPhantasma and Central Fiction.
Now onto what I like. I like how Sayaka is gradually learning how to use her new powers and is getting stronger by getting her ass handed to her by training with Ragna. However their are people who are unaware of BlazeBlue's cannon and Madoka Magica's so you may need to make a chapter that covers both plots of each side of the crossover. Maybe when Torakaka gives Sayaka her lessons and when Rachel asks about Sayaka's world and her back story?
Now I have news Jubei is now playable in Central Fiction! That alone should give you motivation to get back on this story! Speaking of the old cat is Jubei going to help train Sayaka? That would be awesome as Jubei has to know something of Magic being married to Nine and also help iron out some of the flaws in her swordsmanship. Ragna seems to rely mostly on brute force and less on technique so their are openings to exploit in that style and Jubei could help iron them out and refine her style into something respectable. Also I am expecting Sayaka to eventually have a breakdown about her circumstances and the fact she is not entirely human anymore so Jubei and Ragna can help her out gett her head on straight.
Also can I make a request? I would love it if Sayaka and Kyoko's personalities were assimilated into on being with Sayaka being the dominant persona with her gaining Kyoko's traits and her powers added to her own. That would be cool! Also in the sequel it would rock if Sayaka also trained with Jubei along side Jin. That would be really cool! I just had another idea for Sayaka's powers! Seeing as we have one Magical Girl why not make Sayaka take the place of Platinum and take her Ars Armagus and gain her powers and having the personality of Trinity Glassfield as a mentor? That would be awesome as bumping off Platinum would be beneficial as she does not really give much in terms of the games story. However she has to learn Alchemy from Trinity(see Full Metal Alchemist) and grow even more powerful. She is going to need those powers to survive against what life is going to throw at her in the BlazeBlue world.
I also have another idea! Why not make her get an Idea Engine after facing a clone of Lambda using the Idea Engine and merging that with her new powers during the battle. But she has to train hard with Jubei so she can master those new powers and abilities. Also speaking which is Sayaka going to get all the powers that the rest of the BlazBlue cast have? That would be cool and allow here to stand up to some of the big dogs of the BlazBlue World.
I have one more idea for Sayaka if you want to use it. Make her have Aquakenisis befitting her new Fish Motif(See Princess Ruto in Hyrule Warriors)
3/13/2017 c5 
45Touhoufanatic
Okay I just found this and I'm in love. which makes me sad that it hasn't been updated in over a year.
I love the way Sayaka is portrayed and Ragnar training her is hilarious. I totally want to see her fight bang ( for the hilarity of it) and Jin or Makoto. they'd drive her insane and I think they'd be great fights.
hope ya get the urge to continue the beautiful piece of work!
45TouhoufanaticOkay I just found this and I'm in love. which makes me sad that it hasn't been updated in over a year.
I love the way Sayaka is portrayed and Ragnar training her is hilarious. I totally want to see her fight bang ( for the hilarity of it) and Jin or Makoto. they'd drive her insane and I think they'd be great fights.
hope ya get the urge to continue the beautiful piece of work!
2/22/2017 c5 Thunder Dragon
Why you no update!? This is good I would love to see more of this story! Also if I were you I would take this story and make a few sequels that carry over to ChronoPhantasma and Central Fiction. Now onto what I like. I like how Sayaka is gradually learning how to use her new powers and is getting stronger by getting her ass handed to her by training with Ragna. However their are people who are unaware of BlazeBlue's cannon and Madoka Magica's so you may need to make a chapter that covers both plots of each side of the crossover. Maybe when Torakaka gives Sayaka her lessons and when Rachel asks about Sayaka's world and her back story?
Also can I make a request? I would love it if Sayaka and Kyoko's personalities were assimilated into on being with Sayaka being the dominant persona with her gaining Kyoko's traits and her powers added to her own. That would be cool! Also in the sequel it would rock if Sayaka also trained with Jubei along side Jin. That would be really cool! For any of Sayaka's new abilities surprise me! I like what has been done so far and I want to see more.
I just had another idea for Sayaka's powers! Seeing as we have one Magical Girl why not make Sayaka take the place of Platinum and take her Ars Armagus and gain her powers and having the personality of Trinity Glassfield as a mentor? That would be awesome as bumping off Platinum would be beneficial as she does not really give much in terms of the games story. However she has to learn Alchemy from Trinity(see Full Metal Alchemist) and grow even more powerful. She is going to need those powers to survive against what life is going to throw at her in the BlazeBlue world.
I also have another idea! When you are done with ChronoPhantasma and Central Fiction, why not make Sayaka go through Persona 3 befitting the dark side of both Puella Madoka Magica and how dark The Shin Megami Tensei universe can be. Now if it does happen she get's her own Persona called Freya along with all her cannon powers and those from her previous adventure and her Persona's evolved state is called Hecate. Freya was a Norse Goddess associated with feminine magic's and Hecate was a Greek Goddess of Magic so they would fit her Magical Girl motif. That would be awesome! However after trial and error she finds away to summon her Persona without needing the Invoker.
Why you no update!? This is good I would love to see more of this story! Also if I were you I would take this story and make a few sequels that carry over to ChronoPhantasma and Central Fiction. Now onto what I like. I like how Sayaka is gradually learning how to use her new powers and is getting stronger by getting her ass handed to her by training with Ragna. However their are people who are unaware of BlazeBlue's cannon and Madoka Magica's so you may need to make a chapter that covers both plots of each side of the crossover. Maybe when Torakaka gives Sayaka her lessons and when Rachel asks about Sayaka's world and her back story?
Also can I make a request? I would love it if Sayaka and Kyoko's personalities were assimilated into on being with Sayaka being the dominant persona with her gaining Kyoko's traits and her powers added to her own. That would be cool! Also in the sequel it would rock if Sayaka also trained with Jubei along side Jin. That would be really cool! For any of Sayaka's new abilities surprise me! I like what has been done so far and I want to see more.
I just had another idea for Sayaka's powers! Seeing as we have one Magical Girl why not make Sayaka take the place of Platinum and take her Ars Armagus and gain her powers and having the personality of Trinity Glassfield as a mentor? That would be awesome as bumping off Platinum would be beneficial as she does not really give much in terms of the games story. However she has to learn Alchemy from Trinity(see Full Metal Alchemist) and grow even more powerful. She is going to need those powers to survive against what life is going to throw at her in the BlazeBlue world.
I also have another idea! When you are done with ChronoPhantasma and Central Fiction, why not make Sayaka go through Persona 3 befitting the dark side of both Puella Madoka Magica and how dark The Shin Megami Tensei universe can be. Now if it does happen she get's her own Persona called Freya along with all her cannon powers and those from her previous adventure and her Persona's evolved state is called Hecate. Freya was a Norse Goddess associated with feminine magic's and Hecate was a Greek Goddess of Magic so they would fit her Magical Girl motif. That would be awesome! However after trial and error she finds away to summon her Persona without needing the Invoker.
2/2/2017 c5 Thunder Dragon
Why you no update!? This is good I would love to see more of this story! Also if I were you I would take this story and make a few sequels that carry over to ChronoPhantasma and Central Fiction. Now onto what I like. I like how Sayaka is gradually learning how to use her new powers and is getting stronger by getting her ass handed to her by training with Ragna. However their are people who are unaware of BlazeBlue's cannon and Madoka Magica's so you may need to make a chapter that covers both plots of each side of the crossover. Maybe when Torakaka gives Sayaka her lessons and when Rachel asks about Sayaka's world and back story?
Also can I make a request? I would love it if Sayaka and Kyoko's personalities were assimilated into on being with Sayaka being the dominant persona with her gaining Kyoko's traits and her powers added to her own. That would be cool! Also in the sequel it would rock if Sayaka also trained with Jubei along side Jin. That would be really cool! For any of Sayaka's new abilities surprise me! I like what has been done so far and I want to see more.
I just had another idea! Seeing as we have one Magical Girl why not make Sayaka take the place of Platinum and take her Ars Armagus and gain her powers and having the personality of Trinity Glassfield as a mentor? That would be awesome as bumping off Platinum would be beneficial as she does not really give much in terms of the games story.
I also have another idea! Say when you are done with ChronoPhantasma and Central Fiction, why not make Sayaka go through Persona 3 befitting the dark side of both Puella Madoka Magica and how dark The Shin Megami Tensei universe can be. Now if it does happen she get's her own Persona called Freya along with all her cannon powers and those from her previous adventure and her Persona's evolved state is called Hecate. Freya was a Norse Goddess associated with feminine magic's and Hecate was a Greek Goddess of Magic so they would fit her Magical Girl motif. That would be awesome! However after trial and error she finds away to summon her Persona without needing the Invoker
Why you no update!? This is good I would love to see more of this story! Also if I were you I would take this story and make a few sequels that carry over to ChronoPhantasma and Central Fiction. Now onto what I like. I like how Sayaka is gradually learning how to use her new powers and is getting stronger by getting her ass handed to her by training with Ragna. However their are people who are unaware of BlazeBlue's cannon and Madoka Magica's so you may need to make a chapter that covers both plots of each side of the crossover. Maybe when Torakaka gives Sayaka her lessons and when Rachel asks about Sayaka's world and back story?
Also can I make a request? I would love it if Sayaka and Kyoko's personalities were assimilated into on being with Sayaka being the dominant persona with her gaining Kyoko's traits and her powers added to her own. That would be cool! Also in the sequel it would rock if Sayaka also trained with Jubei along side Jin. That would be really cool! For any of Sayaka's new abilities surprise me! I like what has been done so far and I want to see more.
I just had another idea! Seeing as we have one Magical Girl why not make Sayaka take the place of Platinum and take her Ars Armagus and gain her powers and having the personality of Trinity Glassfield as a mentor? That would be awesome as bumping off Platinum would be beneficial as she does not really give much in terms of the games story.
I also have another idea! Say when you are done with ChronoPhantasma and Central Fiction, why not make Sayaka go through Persona 3 befitting the dark side of both Puella Madoka Magica and how dark The Shin Megami Tensei universe can be. Now if it does happen she get's her own Persona called Freya along with all her cannon powers and those from her previous adventure and her Persona's evolved state is called Hecate. Freya was a Norse Goddess associated with feminine magic's and Hecate was a Greek Goddess of Magic so they would fit her Magical Girl motif. That would be awesome! However after trial and error she finds away to summon her Persona without needing the Invoker
2/1/2017 c5 Thunder Dragon
I just had another idea! Seeing as we have one Magical Girl why not make Sayaka take the place of Platinum and take her Ars Armagus and gain her powers and having the personality of Trinity Glassfield as a mentor? That would be awesome as bumping off Platinum would be beneficial as she does not really give much in terms of the games story.
I also have another idea! Say when you are done with ChronoPhantasma and Central Fiction, why not make Sayaka go through Persona 3 befitting the dark side of both Puella Madoka Magica and how dark The Shin Megami Tensei universe can be. Now if it does happen she get's her own Persona called Freya along with all her cannon powers and those from her previous adventure and her Persona's evolved state is called Hecate. Freya was a Norse Goddess associated with feminine magic's and Hecate was a Greek Goddess of Magic so they would fit her Magical Girl motif. That would be awesome! However after trial and error she finds away to summon her Persona without needing the Invoker.
I just had another idea! Seeing as we have one Magical Girl why not make Sayaka take the place of Platinum and take her Ars Armagus and gain her powers and having the personality of Trinity Glassfield as a mentor? That would be awesome as bumping off Platinum would be beneficial as she does not really give much in terms of the games story.
I also have another idea! Say when you are done with ChronoPhantasma and Central Fiction, why not make Sayaka go through Persona 3 befitting the dark side of both Puella Madoka Magica and how dark The Shin Megami Tensei universe can be. Now if it does happen she get's her own Persona called Freya along with all her cannon powers and those from her previous adventure and her Persona's evolved state is called Hecate. Freya was a Norse Goddess associated with feminine magic's and Hecate was a Greek Goddess of Magic so they would fit her Magical Girl motif. That would be awesome! However after trial and error she finds away to summon her Persona without needing the Invoker.
2/1/2017 c5 Thunder Dragon
Why you no update!? This is good I would love to see more of this story! Also if I were you I would take this story and make a few sequels that carry over to ChronoPhantasma and Central Fiction. Now onto what I like. I like how Sayaka is gradually learning how to use her new powers and is getting stronger by getting her ass handed to her by training with Ragna. However their are people who are unaware of BlazeBlue's cannon and Madoka Magica's so you may need to make a chapter that covers both plots of each side of the crossover. Maybe when Torakaka gives Sayaka her lessons and when Rachel asks about Sayaka's world and back story?
Also can I make a request? I would love it if Sayaka and Kyoko's personalities were assimilated into on being with Sayaka being the dominant persona with her gaining Kyoko's traits and her powers added to her own. That would be cool! Also in the sequel it would rock if Sayaka also trained with Jubei along side Jin. That would be really cool! For any of Sayaka's new abilities surprise me! I like what has been done so far and I want to see more.
Why you no update!? This is good I would love to see more of this story! Also if I were you I would take this story and make a few sequels that carry over to ChronoPhantasma and Central Fiction. Now onto what I like. I like how Sayaka is gradually learning how to use her new powers and is getting stronger by getting her ass handed to her by training with Ragna. However their are people who are unaware of BlazeBlue's cannon and Madoka Magica's so you may need to make a chapter that covers both plots of each side of the crossover. Maybe when Torakaka gives Sayaka her lessons and when Rachel asks about Sayaka's world and back story?
Also can I make a request? I would love it if Sayaka and Kyoko's personalities were assimilated into on being with Sayaka being the dominant persona with her gaining Kyoko's traits and her powers added to her own. That would be cool! Also in the sequel it would rock if Sayaka also trained with Jubei along side Jin. That would be really cool! For any of Sayaka's new abilities surprise me! I like what has been done so far and I want to see more.
11/11/2015 c4 10DocHoliday0316
This was a very nice chapter.. As usual, I loved Tao, and I also liked Sayaka and Ragna's interactions with each other. I can't wait to see what Rachel has in store for Sayaka.
10DocHoliday0316This was a very nice chapter.. As usual, I loved Tao, and I also liked Sayaka and Ragna's interactions with each other. I can't wait to see what Rachel has in store for Sayaka.
11/9/2015 c3 DocHoliday0316
Alright, this chapter was pretty good. I loved the fight with Arakune, as well as Sayaka's new powers. And I also loved Taokaka's interactions with Sayaka, and her nickname for her (what I love about Blazblue crossovers is the nicknames that Taokaka will give to crossover characters). And the bit with Bang and Noel was hilarious.
Can't wait to see what happens next. And I feel bad for Sayaka since she's going to eventually go up against Hakumen (a character that repeatedly kicked my ass when I played Blazblue: Calamity Trigger).
Alright, this chapter was pretty good. I loved the fight with Arakune, as well as Sayaka's new powers. And I also loved Taokaka's interactions with Sayaka, and her nickname for her (what I love about Blazblue crossovers is the nicknames that Taokaka will give to crossover characters). And the bit with Bang and Noel was hilarious.
Can't wait to see what happens next. And I feel bad for Sayaka since she's going to eventually go up against Hakumen (a character that repeatedly kicked my ass when I played Blazblue: Calamity Trigger).
11/9/2015 c2 DocHoliday0316
Will this was a nice chapter. I really can't wait to see Ragna and Sayaka's interaction with each other. Also, things are going to get bad now that Relius has taken an interest.
Will this was a nice chapter. I really can't wait to see Ragna and Sayaka's interaction with each other. Also, things are going to get bad now that Relius has taken an interest.
11/8/2015 c1 DocHoliday0316
I'm going to admit, this story sort of reminds me of King of Beasts' "Fate/Continuum Shift" (with Saber being transported to the world of Blazblue at the beginning of Continuum Shift).
However, this story does seem interesting, and I can't wait to see what direction you take it in. Also, I love Sayaka's new look.
I'm going to admit, this story sort of reminds me of King of Beasts' "Fate/Continuum Shift" (with Saber being transported to the world of Blazblue at the beginning of Continuum Shift).
However, this story does seem interesting, and I can't wait to see what direction you take it in. Also, I love Sayaka's new look.