for Rogue Knight3/1/2024 c17 Mayorgman
I had a few moments in early chapters where I was unsure... this is fantastic(so far). You should be very proud.
I had a few moments in early chapters where I was unsure... this is fantastic(so far). You should be very proud.
1/19/2024 c4 Lord Of Domination
if you came here expecting a Sith protagonist with Sith ambitions and sith mentality, then dont bother starting to read this. this author is too retarded and too wimpy to write a dark sith character so instead he made a sith acting like a wannabe jedi, cringe and dumb indeed lmao.
if you came here expecting a Sith protagonist with Sith ambitions and sith mentality, then dont bother starting to read this. this author is too retarded and too wimpy to write a dark sith character so instead he made a sith acting like a wannabe jedi, cringe and dumb indeed lmao.
1/17/2024 c42 asingh123
Read so far
But the story has too much stuff happening without rhyme or reason
I mean...
A. ROB basically f*cked the SI... Fine... No over reliance on his meta knowledge...
B. Your MC is very wooden... Has only 1 expression... He is a smirking sith lord who is too proud but is always hiding what he can really do(when it is actually needed)..and that's it... He only gets angry or frustrated when Asoka is in trouble... Otherwise no matter what is happening... He is just a leaf in the wind... Go with the flow... , but he can't seem to decide if he is fan of the series and want to play on the board, or want to do the SI work and basically overturn the board...
42 chapters... But very minimal character development
Not even going to go to all the stuff added just to make story more war like... I mean... no one understands it, no one has it, no one created it... But sure... It's Sidious... People of course thinks he can do anything...so add whatever you want...
At this point... I am just wondering... Why the hell did your MC not joining CIS... and basically short circuit the whole Sidious thing...
I mean he captured Dooku and Grievous... But then nothing... Everything is same... Nothing changed...
You do too much... With minor to no impact on the so called Space Opera
Read so far
But the story has too much stuff happening without rhyme or reason
I mean...
A. ROB basically f*cked the SI... Fine... No over reliance on his meta knowledge...
B. Your MC is very wooden... Has only 1 expression... He is a smirking sith lord who is too proud but is always hiding what he can really do(when it is actually needed)..and that's it... He only gets angry or frustrated when Asoka is in trouble... Otherwise no matter what is happening... He is just a leaf in the wind... Go with the flow... , but he can't seem to decide if he is fan of the series and want to play on the board, or want to do the SI work and basically overturn the board...
42 chapters... But very minimal character development
Not even going to go to all the stuff added just to make story more war like... I mean... no one understands it, no one has it, no one created it... But sure... It's Sidious... People of course thinks he can do anything...so add whatever you want...
At this point... I am just wondering... Why the hell did your MC not joining CIS... and basically short circuit the whole Sidious thing...
I mean he captured Dooku and Grievous... But then nothing... Everything is same... Nothing changed...
You do too much... With minor to no impact on the so called Space Opera
12/9/2023 c169 Eddyg125
just finished, and it was a very nice ride, though there were some problems such as the insane numbers and seemingly unlimited resources the CIS had, but those are minor things.
just finished, and it was a very nice ride, though there were some problems such as the insane numbers and seemingly unlimited resources the CIS had, but those are minor things.
11/5/2023 c6 Bubba6272
I find myself skipping huge swaths of chapters because the fights never seem to end
I find myself skipping huge swaths of chapters because the fights never seem to end
10/25/2023 c2 Axccel
The current Jedi Code was, in SWTOR’s time, a thought exercise and not something to live by. The entire point was that students were supposed to question it. It was MEANT to be idiotic and paradoxical to provoke thought on the nature of trying to achieve peace, knowledge, harmony, and life when reality contradicted those things. The Jedi who made it would have sooner killed himself than let it come into existence if he knew what the Galactic Republic era Jedi would turn it into.
The current Jedi Code was, in SWTOR’s time, a thought exercise and not something to live by. The entire point was that students were supposed to question it. It was MEANT to be idiotic and paradoxical to provoke thought on the nature of trying to achieve peace, knowledge, harmony, and life when reality contradicted those things. The Jedi who made it would have sooner killed himself than let it come into existence if he knew what the Galactic Republic era Jedi would turn it into.
10/22/2023 c1 Axccel
I agree about Sidious and the rest of the Bane line being just Dark Jedi (including Bane) pretending to be Sith. The Sith were a culture, a society, a people, a civilization. There was a Hell of a lot more to them than "Moar Powah!" and The Old Republic MMO does a wonderful job of portraying that. Bane and his dynasty are merely Force adepts obsessed with the Dark Side. I guarantee that they completely ignored all lessons in Sith Holocrons and other lore sources that explain about the Sith beliefs, religious practices, achievements, etc. and were only interested in techniques and weapons.
Luke is the proof of balance in the Force due to his Jedi Order not shunning their emotions and instead seeking inner harmony and accepting themselves rather than trying to be stoic and cut off part of who they are. Essentially harmonizing light and dark. This, I think, is also why his Jedi are portrayed as incredibly powerful.
I agree about Sidious and the rest of the Bane line being just Dark Jedi (including Bane) pretending to be Sith. The Sith were a culture, a society, a people, a civilization. There was a Hell of a lot more to them than "Moar Powah!" and The Old Republic MMO does a wonderful job of portraying that. Bane and his dynasty are merely Force adepts obsessed with the Dark Side. I guarantee that they completely ignored all lessons in Sith Holocrons and other lore sources that explain about the Sith beliefs, religious practices, achievements, etc. and were only interested in techniques and weapons.
Luke is the proof of balance in the Force due to his Jedi Order not shunning their emotions and instead seeking inner harmony and accepting themselves rather than trying to be stoic and cut off part of who they are. Essentially harmonizing light and dark. This, I think, is also why his Jedi are portrayed as incredibly powerful.
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