for Rogue Knight
14/30/2023 c169 Handers
I just binged read that story, it is really, really good. The writing is superb aside from a couple of typos tenses consistency errors, the scenario is very interesting and the balance of politics, war planning, fights and character growth is superb.
Thank you for writing this story :)
I just binged read that story, it is really, really good. The writing is superb aside from a couple of typos tenses consistency errors, the scenario is very interesting and the balance of politics, war planning, fights and character growth is superb.
Thank you for writing this story :)
3/31/2023 c1 TropesBeDamned
This intro is such a mind numbing word salad that I just can’t be bothered to parse through it. Such a tedious, clutter fuck of a chapter to parse through.
Between the ROB cliche and the random, zero context Gundam nonsense - I’m out.
Also if this is a gundam cross over - why isn’t it listed as such? If I had known, I wouldn’t have bothered.
This intro is such a mind numbing word salad that I just can’t be bothered to parse through it. Such a tedious, clutter fuck of a chapter to parse through.
Between the ROB cliche and the random, zero context Gundam nonsense - I’m out.
Also if this is a gundam cross over - why isn’t it listed as such? If I had known, I wouldn’t have bothered.
3/18/2023 c20 Scarease
One of my Oc's is a Neimoidian that a Rival With Gunray he he blunt ,honest ,calculated ,rational ,reasonable in his business he focus on Quality ,Reliablity ,Customer and employee satisfaction over quantity .He when dealing small business he look at them as investment improve they efficency and such hopeful creates a future business partner or person take in under employment .He hate wasting thing lives ,Money ,food ,time and such .He all about productivity .He hate what culture is hope to also conduct social experiments improve culture mindset out of cowardly ,backstabbing nature only fuel bad economy .
So when come fuck over the trade federation eh would like take joy in it consider that they mess with him quit often .He would love take over it or atleast get good amount power in it .
His Compony special in Tech ,Droids ,Ship parts ,Machines all kinds .
One of my Oc's is a Neimoidian that a Rival With Gunray he he blunt ,honest ,calculated ,rational ,reasonable in his business he focus on Quality ,Reliablity ,Customer and employee satisfaction over quantity .He when dealing small business he look at them as investment improve they efficency and such hopeful creates a future business partner or person take in under employment .He hate wasting thing lives ,Money ,food ,time and such .He all about productivity .He hate what culture is hope to also conduct social experiments improve culture mindset out of cowardly ,backstabbing nature only fuel bad economy .
So when come fuck over the trade federation eh would like take joy in it consider that they mess with him quit often .He would love take over it or atleast get good amount power in it .
His Compony special in Tech ,Droids ,Ship parts ,Machines all kinds .
3/18/2023 c7 Scarease
One of my Ocs is darksider that is a Basterd child of Palpatine that watch Palpatine Murder his mother so he been secretly build empire in out rim wholesome goal of destroy Sith thousand year plan ,all of Sidious allies and final his murderous father .
One of my Ocs is darksider that is a Basterd child of Palpatine that watch Palpatine Murder his mother so he been secretly build empire in out rim wholesome goal of destroy Sith thousand year plan ,all of Sidious allies and final his murderous father .