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1lulubram
I cried. I love this much better then what happened in the anime. I love this sooo much.
1lulubramI cried. I love this much better then what happened in the anime. I love this sooo much.
6/3/2017 c16 Guest
Your story is pretty fine. I like hurt/comfort stuff.
However, your spelling is absolutely awful. There are many very basic mistakes every chapter. Seeing it's been a while, I hope you've improved. For your best interest, I suggest getting a decent beta-reader.
Your story is pretty fine. I like hurt/comfort stuff.
However, your spelling is absolutely awful. There are many very basic mistakes every chapter. Seeing it's been a while, I hope you've improved. For your best interest, I suggest getting a decent beta-reader.
12/5/2015 c42 Rose
Love it make the next chapter
Love it make the next chapter
10/18/2015 c42 Rosewing
Love this story please make more.
Love this story please make more.
8/16/2015 c42 Guest
Like this story make more
Like this story make more
7/31/2015 c42 1OtakuKokoro
Okay so I absolutely love and adore this fix. Everyone was so in character and seriously I loved it. Also I was totally just stalking the tsubasa wiki page and I just got the RG Veda reference. Seriously you are winderful and it was a pleasure to read this story!
1OtakuKokoroOkay so I absolutely love and adore this fix. Everyone was so in character and seriously I loved it. Also I was totally just stalking the tsubasa wiki page and I just got the RG Veda reference. Seriously you are winderful and it was a pleasure to read this story!
6/22/2015 c42 Guest8
I can't believe that I never review the last chapter. Well done. I loved this fic. A continuation could be once the three of them are travelling together (Fai, Kurogane and Syaoran) or when Fai and Kurogane go to live in Nihon. Looking forward to another of your stories. :)
I can't believe that I never review the last chapter. Well done. I loved this fic. A continuation could be once the three of them are travelling together (Fai, Kurogane and Syaoran) or when Fai and Kurogane go to live in Nihon. Looking forward to another of your stories. :)
6/13/2015 c1 OtakuKokoro
This is my favorite KuroFai fanfic. They are so in character and I love all of the details you put into it. I'm glad I followed this story from beginning to end and will be camping out for the sequal. Keep up the great work.
This is my favorite KuroFai fanfic. They are so in character and I love all of the details you put into it. I'm glad I followed this story from beginning to end and will be camping out for the sequal. Keep up the great work.
6/11/2015 c42 62mamika
Final chapter? well, I guess that does make sense now that they are done with Celes and all. but still. but I guess that's all the more reason to enjoy this chap to the fullest ;)
! after the first line I recalled where we left off and I am so glad that Kurogane is still the same. worried about Fai. so cute, he was in the brink of dying and yet his first thoughts through pain are about Fai needing him. so lovely 3
and he takes Fai's presence so naturally. like it would be as important to him as the air he breaths. but I have to say, he does have awesome brains to realize that fast where he is and what had happened. and I see you neatly fitted your story into the manga's setting what with Kurogane waking with tomoyo there. I wonder how you change things from he original. yay! maybe Fai will still bang some sense into the ninja. or does something else cool!
*laughter* funny! I mean the reason why tomoyo kicked Kurogane out ;D gave me a laugh. naughty ninja... XD and aww for the ninja to immediately ask for Fai, even though it has been ages since he last saw the princess. well, that princess at least.
silly ninja! she is chuckling because you are being lovey-dovey, as mokona would put it. you should just admit that it's all about you wanting to see the mage and not just wanting to make Fai at ease. even though that reason is rather adorable too... hmm. anyways. Kurogane is in over his head.
thank god for soma! if not for her, those two would have probably been a little restrained, but now they can go all out in sharing their emotions and thoughts and Kurogane doesn't need to act harsher than he feels like! and FAi slapped him! and the ninja just liftes his hand to his red cheek. what happens next!?
WHat a confession! and the ninja is just smirking there? I seriously gasped when he just smirked and I forgot how to breath when he asked the question! intense!
no, this is not a game but an awesome story! my god my heart is pounding right now!
and the ninja is so positive about life. shit happens. so true *nodding* and he got FAi telling him that Fai loves him. I can't believe how collected his is right now. then again if he wouldn't be the whole thing would fall apart and FAi would probably run off, so good thing he is trained as a ninja to handle all kind of situations. including halfhysteric mages.
*shaking mess* he told Fai he loved him. and then he kissed him. pulled him down and kissed him. hard. very hard. then whispered cute honest things to him and then they kissed again and then they collapsed to the bed and keep on kissing! I think I might have died here. but man. astonishing! loving it! took my breath away it did.
and for him to wrapping his fingers into Fai's hair to keep him from running away. that part was one of my favorite bits.
tomoyo sure is a fangirl. not that I can blame her, who wouldn't want to get a peek of those two... *dreaming*
It's great that they just fall asleep holding each others because I am sick of those stories where people sleep together right after confessing just because they confessed. but here they just had a sweet moment and then they could still just enjoy each others presence without rushing things.
I think after sleeping for a week a bath would be really nice. I wonder if FAi will join him... I guess he has to since the ninja is wounded and all. he should because it's Kurogane and all and it wouldn't be the first time
Kurogane is so clever. he seriously has matured. and it must be nice just enjoying a warm bath together without needing for more. and he is so consoderate towards Fai. and now they can connect on a whole new level with both being severely injured. and healing. wonder what the ninja will think of the hand. and what he will do with it, since then he had something to wrap around Fai's waist ;)
ah, he likes it. gooood.
heh, same old Kurogane. wanting to beat someone. well, for a good reason.
I doubt too that Fai would care. if it feels good and looks nice he would surely wear it anywway.
I knew it! once he got the hand, he used it to wrap it around FAi's waist! yay me for knowing!
yeah. that was good one. I liked the way it ended. it had something of clamp in it.
I dunno about the sequel because this ending worked. so, I just suggest you do whatever you feel like about it. I sure had great time reading this and I liked the story a lot and I bet I would like to read more Kurofai from case you get an incling to write more.
but it was great times and I just want to thank you so much for writing this awesome story :D
and sorry that it took so long to read and review. I have been a bit busy.
once more, thanks. it was great.
62mamikaFinal chapter? well, I guess that does make sense now that they are done with Celes and all. but still. but I guess that's all the more reason to enjoy this chap to the fullest ;)
! after the first line I recalled where we left off and I am so glad that Kurogane is still the same. worried about Fai. so cute, he was in the brink of dying and yet his first thoughts through pain are about Fai needing him. so lovely 3
and he takes Fai's presence so naturally. like it would be as important to him as the air he breaths. but I have to say, he does have awesome brains to realize that fast where he is and what had happened. and I see you neatly fitted your story into the manga's setting what with Kurogane waking with tomoyo there. I wonder how you change things from he original. yay! maybe Fai will still bang some sense into the ninja. or does something else cool!
*laughter* funny! I mean the reason why tomoyo kicked Kurogane out ;D gave me a laugh. naughty ninja... XD and aww for the ninja to immediately ask for Fai, even though it has been ages since he last saw the princess. well, that princess at least.
silly ninja! she is chuckling because you are being lovey-dovey, as mokona would put it. you should just admit that it's all about you wanting to see the mage and not just wanting to make Fai at ease. even though that reason is rather adorable too... hmm. anyways. Kurogane is in over his head.
thank god for soma! if not for her, those two would have probably been a little restrained, but now they can go all out in sharing their emotions and thoughts and Kurogane doesn't need to act harsher than he feels like! and FAi slapped him! and the ninja just liftes his hand to his red cheek. what happens next!?
WHat a confession! and the ninja is just smirking there? I seriously gasped when he just smirked and I forgot how to breath when he asked the question! intense!
no, this is not a game but an awesome story! my god my heart is pounding right now!
and the ninja is so positive about life. shit happens. so true *nodding* and he got FAi telling him that Fai loves him. I can't believe how collected his is right now. then again if he wouldn't be the whole thing would fall apart and FAi would probably run off, so good thing he is trained as a ninja to handle all kind of situations. including halfhysteric mages.
*shaking mess* he told Fai he loved him. and then he kissed him. pulled him down and kissed him. hard. very hard. then whispered cute honest things to him and then they kissed again and then they collapsed to the bed and keep on kissing! I think I might have died here. but man. astonishing! loving it! took my breath away it did.
and for him to wrapping his fingers into Fai's hair to keep him from running away. that part was one of my favorite bits.
tomoyo sure is a fangirl. not that I can blame her, who wouldn't want to get a peek of those two... *dreaming*
It's great that they just fall asleep holding each others because I am sick of those stories where people sleep together right after confessing just because they confessed. but here they just had a sweet moment and then they could still just enjoy each others presence without rushing things.
I think after sleeping for a week a bath would be really nice. I wonder if FAi will join him... I guess he has to since the ninja is wounded and all. he should because it's Kurogane and all and it wouldn't be the first time
Kurogane is so clever. he seriously has matured. and it must be nice just enjoying a warm bath together without needing for more. and he is so consoderate towards Fai. and now they can connect on a whole new level with both being severely injured. and healing. wonder what the ninja will think of the hand. and what he will do with it, since then he had something to wrap around Fai's waist ;)
ah, he likes it. gooood.
heh, same old Kurogane. wanting to beat someone. well, for a good reason.
I doubt too that Fai would care. if it feels good and looks nice he would surely wear it anywway.
I knew it! once he got the hand, he used it to wrap it around FAi's waist! yay me for knowing!
yeah. that was good one. I liked the way it ended. it had something of clamp in it.
I dunno about the sequel because this ending worked. so, I just suggest you do whatever you feel like about it. I sure had great time reading this and I liked the story a lot and I bet I would like to read more Kurofai from case you get an incling to write more.
but it was great times and I just want to thank you so much for writing this awesome story :D
and sorry that it took so long to read and review. I have been a bit busy.
once more, thanks. it was great.
6/7/2015 c42 Yoru-no-Ookami
Personally I don't think that there should be a sequel. The way tied it up with part of the way the anime went worked out well, and that's more or less where it ended. If you wanted to continue and talk about Fei Wang Reed that'd work, but that sounds like more of an ending to me, unless you want to go on about their adventures that take place after the entire manga. Idk.
Anyway, I've followed this story for a long time (since chapter 18 maybe?), and I just wanted to take the time to tell you that I thought it was pretty good, if a little slow. As much as I don't like Ashura in canon, it was interesting seeing a good story where he wasn't such a jerk. It was a good story, and thanks for the regular updates and not abandoning it :D
Personally I don't think that there should be a sequel. The way tied it up with part of the way the anime went worked out well, and that's more or less where it ended. If you wanted to continue and talk about Fei Wang Reed that'd work, but that sounds like more of an ending to me, unless you want to go on about their adventures that take place after the entire manga. Idk.
Anyway, I've followed this story for a long time (since chapter 18 maybe?), and I just wanted to take the time to tell you that I thought it was pretty good, if a little slow. As much as I don't like Ashura in canon, it was interesting seeing a good story where he wasn't such a jerk. It was a good story, and thanks for the regular updates and not abandoning it :D
6/5/2015 c42 2yuuki56
I can't believe I stayed with this fanfic from beginning to end! Thanks for staying with it too; it was one of my favourites! A sequel would be much appreciated, but as for the plot, I have no ideas to give. All I know is that you should probably twist around the following events that happened in the manga and put it almost entirely in Fai's and Kurogane's POV (sort of like you did already ). I look forward to reading it, if you do decide to do one
2yuuki56I can't believe I stayed with this fanfic from beginning to end! Thanks for staying with it too; it was one of my favourites! A sequel would be much appreciated, but as for the plot, I have no ideas to give. All I know is that you should probably twist around the following events that happened in the manga and put it almost entirely in Fai's and Kurogane's POV (sort of like you did already ). I look forward to reading it, if you do decide to do one
6/5/2015 c42 Kira-writer
OMG, no puedo creer que halla terminado. Ame esta historia de principio a fin, y si hicieras una secuela (no importa de que trate) estoy segura que me encantaría leerla.
Muchas gracias por estos 42 capítulos que hicieron "flip-flop" mi corazón de la manera mas positiva.
/Kira/
ps: La única idea que se me viene para una secuela es sobre vistas de su relación creciendo a algo mucho mas serio ("físico", tal vez). ¡Pero se que tu puedes pensar en algo muchísimo mejor!
OMG, no puedo creer que halla terminado. Ame esta historia de principio a fin, y si hicieras una secuela (no importa de que trate) estoy segura que me encantaría leerla.
Muchas gracias por estos 42 capítulos que hicieron "flip-flop" mi corazón de la manera mas positiva.
/Kira/
ps: La única idea que se me viene para una secuela es sobre vistas de su relación creciendo a algo mucho mas serio ("físico", tal vez). ¡Pero se que tu puedes pensar en algo muchísimo mejor!
6/3/2015 c41 TitansGirl
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhghhhgghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh XO
love the story, btw, hope to see an update soon!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhghhhgghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh XO
love the story, btw, hope to see an update soon!
5/31/2015 c41 62mamika
Fai is so cute! twitching and fidgetin and playing with Kurogane's hands. that's just so adorable!
and it's so good to see that he is now thinking of Kurogane and how much he really means to him and how comfortable he is with the ninja. it's also funny how Fai thinks that it's hard to ignore Kurogane :D
no, of course he doesn't care what others think! he only cares that he can make you feel better. and honestly, I also think that he relish that you are so close to him and keep touching you while the pervert priest is watching.
it's so sweet when Kurogane placed his hand on Fai's knee to kep it from jumping. and not to mention how Fai grabs his hand again 3
*gasp* ! he is crying against Kurogane's neck in public?! that's a surprise. and lovely. poor little blond.
aww, Kuro-neko is so toughtfull and observant. he let's Fai be as long as he can handle himself. but still does not take his eyes away from the mage. such loyalty
and now he is holding Fai 3
no! damn! It's hard to believe that Kurogane would let Fai get hurt like that :( I hope he smacks some sense into that kid
NOOOOOO! I am sure Kurogane will be okay, but still, I am worried. he is hurt. bad. but I still liked the ending, because it showed how important the other one is. since Kurogane looked at Fai when he yelled even though he was in the middle of a fight and then Fai used magic and rushed to the ninja's side even though he was badly hurt himself. they are amazing and thei bond is unbreakable.
very touching chapter. you have made those two very cool. it was great chapter and I am looking forward for more :D
62mamikaFai is so cute! twitching and fidgetin and playing with Kurogane's hands. that's just so adorable!
and it's so good to see that he is now thinking of Kurogane and how much he really means to him and how comfortable he is with the ninja. it's also funny how Fai thinks that it's hard to ignore Kurogane :D
no, of course he doesn't care what others think! he only cares that he can make you feel better. and honestly, I also think that he relish that you are so close to him and keep touching you while the pervert priest is watching.
it's so sweet when Kurogane placed his hand on Fai's knee to kep it from jumping. and not to mention how Fai grabs his hand again 3
*gasp* ! he is crying against Kurogane's neck in public?! that's a surprise. and lovely. poor little blond.
aww, Kuro-neko is so toughtfull and observant. he let's Fai be as long as he can handle himself. but still does not take his eyes away from the mage. such loyalty
and now he is holding Fai 3
no! damn! It's hard to believe that Kurogane would let Fai get hurt like that :( I hope he smacks some sense into that kid
NOOOOOO! I am sure Kurogane will be okay, but still, I am worried. he is hurt. bad. but I still liked the ending, because it showed how important the other one is. since Kurogane looked at Fai when he yelled even though he was in the middle of a fight and then Fai used magic and rushed to the ninja's side even though he was badly hurt himself. they are amazing and thei bond is unbreakable.
very touching chapter. you have made those two very cool. it was great chapter and I am looking forward for more :D