for A Fake Familiar3/6/2018 c5 Kai0ken
The first four chapter were a nice read, but this chapter felt more like an info-dump than an actual chapter. Your character's reactions were far too two-dimensional in most of the scenes.
Good Day
The first four chapter were a nice read, but this chapter felt more like an info-dump than an actual chapter. Your character's reactions were far too two-dimensional in most of the scenes.
Good Day
3/6/2018 c5 Guest
Nice chaptter . Just promise me that you will never abandon this story and i will be happy .
Nice chaptter . Just promise me that you will never abandon this story and i will be happy .
3/5/2018 c5 pyre101
This story has quite the novel concept. Using Archer as a familiar? Definitely is interesting.
If I may, I suggest giving Issei some magical power. I say this, because in canon, he has no ability. In most fan fictions that have either crossovers or OCs, he is bashed. He is perverted, but he can be taught, but one thing he still seems to lack is actual magic power. Just something to think about.
This story has quite the novel concept. Using Archer as a familiar? Definitely is interesting.
If I may, I suggest giving Issei some magical power. I say this, because in canon, he has no ability. In most fan fictions that have either crossovers or OCs, he is bashed. He is perverted, but he can be taught, but one thing he still seems to lack is actual magic power. Just something to think about.
3/5/2018 c5 
9StoryReiter
Shroud of Martin is red in color and Archer's shroud is also red. Quite a common fallacy but I believe they're the same. Now that I realized it Rias's Red and Archer's red go well together just like him and Rin do. The thing with Asia is coming next huh? Looking forward to the siscons to make an appearance since Archer's here. Dream Cycle's going to be a b*tch for Rias though since its only the first part not even including his larger part in a certain system. It also means Archer's going to see Rias's dreams... IF HE EVEN SLEEPS IN THE FIRST PLACE! Koneko's cute and... Looking forward to more. Thanks for the story, have a good day and take care author.
9StoryReiterShroud of Martin is red in color and Archer's shroud is also red. Quite a common fallacy but I believe they're the same. Now that I realized it Rias's Red and Archer's red go well together just like him and Rin do. The thing with Asia is coming next huh? Looking forward to the siscons to make an appearance since Archer's here. Dream Cycle's going to be a b*tch for Rias though since its only the first part not even including his larger part in a certain system. It also means Archer's going to see Rias's dreams... IF HE EVEN SLEEPS IN THE FIRST PLACE! Koneko's cute and... Looking forward to more. Thanks for the story, have a good day and take care author.
3/5/2018 c5 Giuseppe Mendoza Vargas
genial crossover, espero que los héroes de la hero faction sean iguales a los que aparecen en el Nasuverse. Quiero ver a Archer dándole sermones a Arthur (femArthur) y como destruye a Heracles con Nine Lives sin sudar
genial crossover, espero que los héroes de la hero faction sean iguales a los que aparecen en el Nasuverse. Quiero ver a Archer dándole sermones a Arthur (femArthur) y como destruye a Heracles con Nine Lives sin sudar
3/5/2018 c5 Anon564
While it is never specifically stated how it's called, Archer's Holy Shroud is supposed to be a Conceptual Armament that he recieved from a Church Operative codenamed Yumi and it's purpose is to protect the wearer from outside conditions, namely weather and temperarure.
At least as I recall.
While it is never specifically stated how it's called, Archer's Holy Shroud is supposed to be a Conceptual Armament that he recieved from a Church Operative codenamed Yumi and it's purpose is to protect the wearer from outside conditions, namely weather and temperarure.
At least as I recall.
3/5/2018 c1 81L33t Horo
the name of the outfit is the shroud of Martin... it has no properties other than protecting the wearer from the elements
81L33t Horothe name of the outfit is the shroud of Martin... it has no properties other than protecting the wearer from the elements
3/5/2018 c5 Dareth
Nobody actually knows the name of Emiya's holy shroud, or who gave it to him. Speculated, that it was given to him by either Ciel or Karen. So it's either Shroud of St. Martin (likely as it used to belong to Kotomine Kirei, Karen's father), or the Shroud of Magdalene (unlikely, as that one is meant to be used only by females).
Nobody actually knows the name of Emiya's holy shroud, or who gave it to him. Speculated, that it was given to him by either Ciel or Karen. So it's either Shroud of St. Martin (likely as it used to belong to Kotomine Kirei, Karen's father), or the Shroud of Magdalene (unlikely, as that one is meant to be used only by females).
3/5/2018 c5 7Paxloria
Great chapter!
Looking forward to reading more.
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Theres something I don't get though...
-To ressurect Issei as a devil, Rias would have originally have to use up all her pawns.
-However, Archer was able to temperarally boost the power of the Evil Pieces to the point that they were TWICE as powerful as before.
-After Issei's ressurection, because of Archer's help, Rias had 2 pawns left over instead of none.
So my question is this:
Why didn't Rias have more than 2 Evil pawn pieces left over?
If the pwer of the used Pawn Pieces was boosted to be twice as strong, then that means that Rias should have used half as many Pawn Pieces to ressurect Issei.
THIS means that Rias SHOULD have had more than 2 pwan pieces left.
If this wasn't the case, then it would mean that without Archer helping, even if she'd used all her pawn pieces she STILL would not have had enough to chang Issei into a devil.
7PaxloriaGreat chapter!
Looking forward to reading more.
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Theres something I don't get though...
-To ressurect Issei as a devil, Rias would have originally have to use up all her pawns.
-However, Archer was able to temperarally boost the power of the Evil Pieces to the point that they were TWICE as powerful as before.
-After Issei's ressurection, because of Archer's help, Rias had 2 pawns left over instead of none.
So my question is this:
Why didn't Rias have more than 2 Evil pawn pieces left over?
If the pwer of the used Pawn Pieces was boosted to be twice as strong, then that means that Rias should have used half as many Pawn Pieces to ressurect Issei.
THIS means that Rias SHOULD have had more than 2 pwan pieces left.
If this wasn't the case, then it would mean that without Archer helping, even if she'd used all her pawn pieces she STILL would not have had enough to chang Issei into a devil.
3/5/2018 c1 The Rupture
Great can definitely kill primate murder due sheer crushing power, But Against ORT, great Red Can't. The Gap of their power is just to huge. And ORT Attack which is Conceptual in Nature would cripple great red, Add ORT'S Crystal Valley and its Over, Great Red would be easily defeated. Even if you Gather all The Most Powerful Warrior's of Dxd to Fight they'd still lose.
P/s Great Red is not even on the level of a True Demon in Nasu Verse, which Ultimate ones Exceed.
Note: Dxd is written in First Person point of view, So it's Hard to gauge the fighting power of Dxd Cast Unlike Nasu Verse.
Great can definitely kill primate murder due sheer crushing power, But Against ORT, great Red Can't. The Gap of their power is just to huge. And ORT Attack which is Conceptual in Nature would cripple great red, Add ORT'S Crystal Valley and its Over, Great Red would be easily defeated. Even if you Gather all The Most Powerful Warrior's of Dxd to Fight they'd still lose.
P/s Great Red is not even on the level of a True Demon in Nasu Verse, which Ultimate ones Exceed.
Note: Dxd is written in First Person point of view, So it's Hard to gauge the fighting power of Dxd Cast Unlike Nasu Verse.
3/5/2018 c5 2nobodyreallyimportant
I thought it was also the shroud of Martin, just acquired later and through different circumstances.
But maybe I just read that in a fanfic...
2nobodyreallyimportantI thought it was also the shroud of Martin, just acquired later and through different circumstances.
But maybe I just read that in a fanfic...