for A Fake Familiar3/7/2018 c5 TheIdioticMelody
Thank you for the great chapters!
I just read through your story all in one go and now... it's 2 AM, but I REGRET NOTHING.
Your story is really unique and no one has ever written anything like it before, so I'm really looking forward to whats going to happen next!
This story at the moment feels like a slice of life with how smooth everything is, I can't wait to see how you put a spin on future chapters.
P.S. I'm sorry I'm not signed in at the moment!
Thank you for the great chapters!
I just read through your story all in one go and now... it's 2 AM, but I REGRET NOTHING.
Your story is really unique and no one has ever written anything like it before, so I'm really looking forward to whats going to happen next!
This story at the moment feels like a slice of life with how smooth everything is, I can't wait to see how you put a spin on future chapters.
P.S. I'm sorry I'm not signed in at the moment!
3/7/2018 c5 Agent Frank
Glad you updated, I am very interested in seeing what direction you will take this story.
Glad you updated, I am very interested in seeing what direction you will take this story.
3/7/2018 c5 Ferdiad
Still think I'd prefer if Archer was a ittle more colder. He's been trapped in a state of utter despair for good knows how long, a little affection shouldn't work on him this quickly. His "rehabilitation" should be a long and gradual thing IMO.
Still think I'd prefer if Archer was a ittle more colder. He's been trapped in a state of utter despair for good knows how long, a little affection shouldn't work on him this quickly. His "rehabilitation" should be a long and gradual thing IMO.
3/6/2018 c5 Guest
IIRC Archer's shroud is the Shroud of Martin.
IIRC Archer's shroud is the Shroud of Martin.
3/6/2018 c5 Kai0ken
The first four chapter were a nice read, but this chapter felt more like an info-dump than an actual chapter. Your character's reactions were far too two-dimensional in most of the scenes.
Good Day
The first four chapter were a nice read, but this chapter felt more like an info-dump than an actual chapter. Your character's reactions were far too two-dimensional in most of the scenes.
Good Day
3/6/2018 c5 Guest
Nice chaptter . Just promise me that you will never abandon this story and i will be happy .
Nice chaptter . Just promise me that you will never abandon this story and i will be happy .
3/5/2018 c5 pyre101
This story has quite the novel concept. Using Archer as a familiar? Definitely is interesting.
If I may, I suggest giving Issei some magical power. I say this, because in canon, he has no ability. In most fan fictions that have either crossovers or OCs, he is bashed. He is perverted, but he can be taught, but one thing he still seems to lack is actual magic power. Just something to think about.
This story has quite the novel concept. Using Archer as a familiar? Definitely is interesting.
If I may, I suggest giving Issei some magical power. I say this, because in canon, he has no ability. In most fan fictions that have either crossovers or OCs, he is bashed. He is perverted, but he can be taught, but one thing he still seems to lack is actual magic power. Just something to think about.
3/5/2018 c5 
10StoryReiter
Shroud of Martin is red in color and Archer's shroud is also red. Quite a common fallacy but I believe they're the same. Now that I realized it Rias's Red and Archer's red go well together just like him and Rin do. The thing with Asia is coming next huh? Looking forward to the siscons to make an appearance since Archer's here. Dream Cycle's going to be a b*tch for Rias though since its only the first part not even including his larger part in a certain system. It also means Archer's going to see Rias's dreams... IF HE EVEN SLEEPS IN THE FIRST PLACE! Koneko's cute and... Looking forward to more. Thanks for the story, have a good day and take care author.
10StoryReiterShroud of Martin is red in color and Archer's shroud is also red. Quite a common fallacy but I believe they're the same. Now that I realized it Rias's Red and Archer's red go well together just like him and Rin do. The thing with Asia is coming next huh? Looking forward to the siscons to make an appearance since Archer's here. Dream Cycle's going to be a b*tch for Rias though since its only the first part not even including his larger part in a certain system. It also means Archer's going to see Rias's dreams... IF HE EVEN SLEEPS IN THE FIRST PLACE! Koneko's cute and... Looking forward to more. Thanks for the story, have a good day and take care author.