
7/17/2021 c5 Guest
It slaps
It slaps
7/14/2021 c5 Exiia
I really hope you’re just busy with life in general and not completely dropping this story :( I really enjoyed it so far and I can’t wait for future updates! Its been 3 years but I hope you do come back
I really hope you’re just busy with life in general and not completely dropping this story :( I really enjoyed it so far and I can’t wait for future updates! Its been 3 years but I hope you do come back
7/6/2021 c2
1rainbowfiredrake
First off I love this story and I have never seen one like tis before and I am excited for it. Second the Monster musume crossover sounds awesome.

First off I love this story and I have never seen one like tis before and I am excited for it. Second the Monster musume crossover sounds awesome.
5/2/2021 c5
1FireFox2590
I really hope you chose to continue this story some time w I am loving it so far.

I really hope you chose to continue this story some time w I am loving it so far.
5/2/2021 c1 FireFox2590
I want to see more of this please! If you are still around I want to see more of this! It is great so far and I love the concept! Even a rewrite would be good if you felt that you needed to do so!
I want to see more of this please! If you are still around I want to see more of this! It is great so far and I love the concept! Even a rewrite would be good if you felt that you needed to do so!
1/13/2021 c5 Guest
what the hell please update i love detailed good stories i want more man please
what the hell please update i love detailed good stories i want more man please
10/19/2020 c2
1KyuubiMakai009
I would very much like to see the Fate/Musume story please. Especially since it's brought about by the whims of Fuji-nee.

I would very much like to see the Fate/Musume story please. Especially since it's brought about by the whims of Fuji-nee.
10/3/2020 c5
2Isaac LB
It is the Shroud of San Martín, it cuts and suppresses the current outflow and inlet of Prana where it is placed, protecting Archer against any type of sorcery and it can also seal the magical abilities of the one who carries it.

It is the Shroud of San Martín, it cuts and suppresses the current outflow and inlet of Prana where it is placed, protecting Archer against any type of sorcery and it can also seal the magical abilities of the one who carries it.
9/8/2020 c1 yuuji1
DAMMIT.. WHY? Whenever I find after hours of searching for an excellent fanfic, the author leaves the story behind.
DAMMIT.. WHY? Whenever I find after hours of searching for an excellent fanfic, the author leaves the story behind.
8/28/2020 c5 Guest
I really love what you have here and eagerly await the release of the next chapter. Hopefully you’ve survived and remained safe during those epidemic and plan to write some more, as both of your Archer centric stories are amazing and deserve some more love. I look forward to how you write the next chapter, as like Issei said, he’s still a dick(for taking years to write a single chapter), but at least he’s reliable. Almost feels like you were describing yourself XD. Jokes aside I really want to see more of this and for the whole shroud thing, I don’t think it’s ever actually stated but I have seen a fic where it’s Shirou’s route to where he becomes Archer(like the life of the original Archer, not a Shirou who meets Archer and still follows his path but of a Shirou who is Archer Emiya) and it’s pretty good. Pairing was Shirou and Ciel, actually underrated pairing, it was really that well written, where it has him help out the executioners and meets Ciel, who becomes his partner/lover and gifts him the shroud. Can’t remember it’s name or power but the name of the fic was A Farewell to Unlimited Blade Works. If you want to write about Archers past this could help a bit more. Anyways, I hope to see another chapter and I’ll wait however long it takes, since the wait only seems to make it better.
I really love what you have here and eagerly await the release of the next chapter. Hopefully you’ve survived and remained safe during those epidemic and plan to write some more, as both of your Archer centric stories are amazing and deserve some more love. I look forward to how you write the next chapter, as like Issei said, he’s still a dick(for taking years to write a single chapter), but at least he’s reliable. Almost feels like you were describing yourself XD. Jokes aside I really want to see more of this and for the whole shroud thing, I don’t think it’s ever actually stated but I have seen a fic where it’s Shirou’s route to where he becomes Archer(like the life of the original Archer, not a Shirou who meets Archer and still follows his path but of a Shirou who is Archer Emiya) and it’s pretty good. Pairing was Shirou and Ciel, actually underrated pairing, it was really that well written, where it has him help out the executioners and meets Ciel, who becomes his partner/lover and gifts him the shroud. Can’t remember it’s name or power but the name of the fic was A Farewell to Unlimited Blade Works. If you want to write about Archers past this could help a bit more. Anyways, I hope to see another chapter and I’ll wait however long it takes, since the wait only seems to make it better.