for A Fake Familiar10/29/2014 c1 Inverness
I was interested in this until I read your note. Issei is one of the most entertaining things about DxD. I've had quite enough of stories that overshadow him, marginalize him, or replace him with some other SI, OC, or crossover character. I also feel like these people only watched the anime and didn't read the light novels.
You're also not the first author that's implied that I'm supposed to care about Boosted Gear appearing at all when Issei won't. It's disappointing that there are actually people in the fandom that are receptive to that. The Boosted Gear isn't nearly as important as Issei, in my opinion.
I was interested in this until I read your note. Issei is one of the most entertaining things about DxD. I've had quite enough of stories that overshadow him, marginalize him, or replace him with some other SI, OC, or crossover character. I also feel like these people only watched the anime and didn't read the light novels.
You're also not the first author that's implied that I'm supposed to care about Boosted Gear appearing at all when Issei won't. It's disappointing that there are actually people in the fandom that are receptive to that. The Boosted Gear isn't nearly as important as Issei, in my opinion.
10/29/2014 c1 Phantasys
Good story...though the question is stupid. Great Red is infinitely more powerful than any other DxD character alive and to put it in perspective Serafall (one of the 2 satans that has not reached the level of "super devil") is capable of destroying a country the size of Japan several times over with a single swing of her cosplay mahou shoujo toy...A super Devil is around 10x that strong...now imagine something that eclipses even that so many times over it's not even funny.
Primate Murder is something created by a planet and therefore cannot be more than a planet class threat...Great Red could probably turn the whole solar system into space dust with ease there is no comparison.
Good story...though the question is stupid. Great Red is infinitely more powerful than any other DxD character alive and to put it in perspective Serafall (one of the 2 satans that has not reached the level of "super devil") is capable of destroying a country the size of Japan several times over with a single swing of her cosplay mahou shoujo toy...A super Devil is around 10x that strong...now imagine something that eclipses even that so many times over it's not even funny.
Primate Murder is something created by a planet and therefore cannot be more than a planet class threat...Great Red could probably turn the whole solar system into space dust with ease there is no comparison.
10/29/2014 c1 Tetsudai-kun
Pretty interesting concept you've got here. I liked th chapter and you managed to get through it without being too "info-dump"y. Good job.
Also about the poll. It's an interesting concept and it took me a bit but I chose a logical choice. If Great Red is stronger than Ophis who was the power of the infinite (a.k.a having infinite power levels) then it makes sense for him to be stronger than Primate Murder.
Although PM hasn't been involved in type-moon nearly as much as Great Red competitively so I could be wrong.
Pretty interesting concept you've got here. I liked th chapter and you managed to get through it without being too "info-dump"y. Good job.
Also about the poll. It's an interesting concept and it took me a bit but I chose a logical choice. If Great Red is stronger than Ophis who was the power of the infinite (a.k.a having infinite power levels) then it makes sense for him to be stronger than Primate Murder.
Although PM hasn't been involved in type-moon nearly as much as Great Red competitively so I could be wrong.
10/29/2014 c1 Server lock
You obviously spent a lot of time on this concept, so I don't want to criticize it. How far ahead did you plan this story since most of your other stories tend to not be completed? I don't want to put this in my favorites if it turns into a rushed story. I also would like to know what perspective this story is in.
You obviously spent a lot of time on this concept, so I don't want to criticize it. How far ahead did you plan this story since most of your other stories tend to not be completed? I don't want to put this in my favorites if it turns into a rushed story. I also would like to know what perspective this story is in.
10/29/2014 c1 TeiKEY-SaMa
Can't wait for Archer's awesomeness to appear in this story good luck writing the next chapter.
Can't wait for Archer's awesomeness to appear in this story good luck writing the next chapter.
10/29/2014 c1 blarg7865
A lot of people say that Great Red is stronger, it might be. One thing most people seem to forget is that if Great Red appeared on the Typemoon universe Earth, his power will weaken greatly, because of Gaia.
A lot of people say that Great Red is stronger, it might be. One thing most people seem to forget is that if Great Red appeared on the Typemoon universe Earth, his power will weaken greatly, because of Gaia.
10/28/2014 c1 Guest
This is great. well written(a few typos but not to many), an interesting concept and well captured personalities. I look forward to more.
and Great Red is in my opinion at least low Aristotele level and would OWN Primate Murder (especially since primate can only fight at full power against well...primates) it would be a good fight though.
This is great. well written(a few typos but not to many), an interesting concept and well captured personalities. I look forward to more.
and Great Red is in my opinion at least low Aristotele level and would OWN Primate Murder (especially since primate can only fight at full power against well...primates) it would be a good fight though.
10/28/2014 c1 K
Things of note:
1: Non gaia verse means: Destroy the command seals is just that, only the seals. the servants remain in existence until they themselves give up the last bit of their own prana, and any magus servant can regenerate those over time.
2. Non gaia verse means: Projections dont fade and arent limited by gaia.
Things of note:
1: Non gaia verse means: Destroy the command seals is just that, only the seals. the servants remain in existence until they themselves give up the last bit of their own prana, and any magus servant can regenerate those over time.
2. Non gaia verse means: Projections dont fade and arent limited by gaia.
10/28/2014 c1 Outsider
Wow I really like your story so far, keep up the good work. As for who is stronger between great red or primate murder, is difficult to decided both are more of a concept than an actual creature, primate murder is basically the embodiment of Gaia's hatred for humanity, and great red represents dreams and illusions. Anyways thanks for a great story, hope to read more of it soon. thanks
Wow I really like your story so far, keep up the good work. As for who is stronger between great red or primate murder, is difficult to decided both are more of a concept than an actual creature, primate murder is basically the embodiment of Gaia's hatred for humanity, and great red represents dreams and illusions. Anyways thanks for a great story, hope to read more of it soon. thanks
10/28/2014 c1 Kinunatzs
which is stronger? Great Red (GR) or Primate Murder (PM)? in terms of Raw Magical Power it's Great Red but in terms of Raw Physical Might it's Primate Murder and if GR played it right and only using Magical Attacks and never attack PM physically and never increase his physical stats GR would win but if GR increase his physical stats and fight PM in a physical battle GR would be trashed around since PM has an ability to increase it's stats One-Rank-Higher than it's enemy this only apllies to Strength, Endurance, Agility and Durability and I don't know if Magical Power is included though
which is stronger? Great Red (GR) or Primate Murder (PM)? in terms of Raw Magical Power it's Great Red but in terms of Raw Physical Might it's Primate Murder and if GR played it right and only using Magical Attacks and never attack PM physically and never increase his physical stats GR would win but if GR increase his physical stats and fight PM in a physical battle GR would be trashed around since PM has an ability to increase it's stats One-Rank-Higher than it's enemy this only apllies to Strength, Endurance, Agility and Durability and I don't know if Magical Power is included though
10/28/2014 c1 withdranwnmadness000
huh this is an interesting concept. curious to see more. if issei is not gonna be there a lot so who has boosted gear? anyway nice chapter keep it up
huh this is an interesting concept. curious to see more. if issei is not gonna be there a lot so who has boosted gear? anyway nice chapter keep it up
10/28/2014 c1 Amatsumi
The Great Red possibly but i can't sure since its confirmed to be both a Dragon with full control of dream or Dragon Shaped Anthropomorphic Personification of Concept of Dream.
Primate Murder is Limited by Gaia in accordance to threat to IT. Either Gaia is an Entity limited on Planet or Universal Entity that limits, erases, crushes or remove anything powerful to be a threat to IT but its disproven since i read about Nasuverse TYPES, Aristotles and ORTs (See Typemoon wiki for [World of Notes] references.)
The Great Red possibly but i can't sure since its confirmed to be both a Dragon with full control of dream or Dragon Shaped Anthropomorphic Personification of Concept of Dream.
Primate Murder is Limited by Gaia in accordance to threat to IT. Either Gaia is an Entity limited on Planet or Universal Entity that limits, erases, crushes or remove anything powerful to be a threat to IT but its disproven since i read about Nasuverse TYPES, Aristotles and ORTs (See Typemoon wiki for [World of Notes] references.)