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10/28/2014 c1 Guest
Bring out Gun God with his Black Barrel and I assure u he could kill everyone in a single shot. I mean the thing itself is called Longinus fuck true Longinus the Black Barrel offers insta-win against Great Red.
Also the story is nice, its original as far as plot has gone will u first follow the plot or will it bec,ome completely AU?
10/28/2014 c1 Swanboy
Interesting read so far.
Looking forward to finding more.

Also
Great Red of course, he is just ridiculous.
10/28/2014 c1 wikerens
Definitely an interesting story. Do hope it will be a harem thou, and dope hope Rias won't be the main girl as most DxD fics go by. Really want to see a more diverse harem.
10/28/2014 c1 Legend3881
I like the concept and the first chapter was well written. How Rias obtained Archer is a little strange. I think something like Rias and her peerage stopping stray mages carrying out a forbidden ritual to summon a powerful servant and rias gets tied into the ritual would have been a better fit or something like that. Having the command seals just show up out of the blue is strange.

While archer is bad ass I hope you connect him to the DXD world is some other ways. Give him a unique aspect or power that connects him to the DXD world. While he is stronger than Rias peerage now, That will change soon considering the fast growth in power they underwent.

Cannot wait for the next chapter.
10/28/2014 c1 AstralJean
It's a very good start, but do hope it's not one of those stories where other people from DxD start summoning other servants from FSN and another grail war (in some way different) begins. A seriously bad and not very interesting plot, never really was. You've done a very good job with the first chapter and really want to see Archer being the sole FSN character here.
10/28/2014 c1 4the lone soul
very very very interesting indeed i really look forward to unlimited blade works hehe other than that its alright but i bet rias isnt the only one with a sercant my gut is telling me even the scumbag riser has one probably but that is only a guess

keep up the good work bro
10/28/2014 c1 Guest
I hope Archer still has his tracing abilities and Noble Phantasms
10/28/2014 c1 Lone Gundam
This was actually a good chapter, you're completely right about how no one has attempted to write about DXD characters being Masters. Though I hope there's an explanation for why Rias got Command Seals, is the Grail somehow in the DXDverse or something else?
10/28/2014 c1 seborg2
Very good first chapter and I agree that it is weird that no one has thought of it. Anyway please upload the next chapter soon.
10/28/2014 c1 1NIX'S WARDEN
This is really good. I look forwards to more.
10/28/2014 c1 Bills
Will archer become a devil and if possible will he be able to copy sacred gears to besides the swords type, like boosted gear ?
10/28/2014 c1 Isaac
I can't wait for the anime to catch up and show more of Issei's badass development, at least writers would stop omitting him from crossovers then.

Otherwise this seems pretty interesting, Im hoping for more servants to appear but I like Archers presence and am wondering how that will effect the story, looking forward to it.
10/28/2014 c1 Imperial warlord
Interesting story.
10/28/2014 c1 7Astraliebe
excellent start, can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
10/28/2014 c1 Abel
Not bad, How about Sona get her owen - maybe lancer from Night or Zero?
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