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6/3/2015 c1 31alice writes stuff
Alright, I'm going to be honest. This is a nice story, I do like the concept. The only thing I would say is that you could've maybe cut down on the amount of OCs in the story- particularly the royal ones. It got a little confusing after a while. Other than that, I thought it was a good story. I'd recommend getting a friend to check it over, though, as there were a few issues with spelling and grammar. Honestly, I think that if you got a good beta and cut down on the OCs a little, this would be quite a good story.
5/29/2015 c2 Nightelf
Nice. But not to sound rude but are u ever going to update my heart my soul my love?
5/19/2015 c2 17DS2010
Wow. What a large clan. Sad Belgarion was injured, hope he wakes up soon.
5/19/2015 c2 9Herne
Good job, can't wait to see what happens next.
10/29/2014 c1 17DS2010
What big families they had! When Garion was told he would have lots of babies the universe was not kidding.

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