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9/4/2015 c1 15Zoela
Please..., update soon
1/30/2015 c2 Sunny
Hey.
Your Story is really good.
You ask for grammer tipps?
I am from Germany and in Chapter 2 the line "Schnallen Sie sich wieder an und bringen in Vorbereitung zur Landung Ihre R├╝ckenlehne wieder in die Senkrechte und klappen Ihren Tisch hoch. Vielen Dank." Should be "Schnallen Sie sich bitte wieder an und bringen Sie in Vorbereitung..." also the german term for "packet" is *Paket*
Do you translate it with Google or do you learn german by yourself? It is really good. Better than my english. :D I hope you can read it.
12/10/2014 c2 LLL
This is a superb story, and one of the very few to include another language inside of an English story. I have already fallen in love with your OC and I can't wait until you finish the next chapter. Will she meet Kid, Shinichi, Conan, Vermouth, a BO member, or somebody else? There are a few misplaced or incorrect words in this, but they aren't too noticeable.

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