for Harry Potter and the Rise of the Inquisitor3/4/2020 c2 
2Lordlexx
Aaaaannd you just ruined it with him being all the founders Heir... He's in another fucking world. Those names don't mean shit. Perevell I can potentially be ok with him announcing for the sake of plot, the others not so much. That and he sounds like a pretentious twat introducing himself like that. What 14 year old is gonna say that hes the Lord of a bunch of houses and then go on to say "I wanna open a bar!"? Like really? A teenage Lord wants to open a bar...
2LordlexxAaaaannd you just ruined it with him being all the founders Heir... He's in another fucking world. Those names don't mean shit. Perevell I can potentially be ok with him announcing for the sake of plot, the others not so much. That and he sounds like a pretentious twat introducing himself like that. What 14 year old is gonna say that hes the Lord of a bunch of houses and then go on to say "I wanna open a bar!"? Like really? A teenage Lord wants to open a bar...
8/16/2017 c2 2FireKing500
I think you forgot to write a few paragraphs because no where did Carver insult Harry's parents. He only said he thought he was a Templar. Also how did Ignotus and his brothers travel from Thedas to Earth or vice versa? Will Harry ever go back to Earth because I would rather he not bc I think the Hawkes got to Kirkwall when Bethany was in her early 20s or late teens. I have no clue if that is right, I am just guessing
2FireKing500I think you forgot to write a few paragraphs because no where did Carver insult Harry's parents. He only said he thought he was a Templar. Also how did Ignotus and his brothers travel from Thedas to Earth or vice versa? Will Harry ever go back to Earth because I would rather he not bc I think the Hawkes got to Kirkwall when Bethany was in her early 20s or late teens. I have no clue if that is right, I am just guessing
12/23/2016 c2 ABECADEO
I am so confused, when did Carver insult Harry's parents? Calling one a Templar doesn't sound like it o.O
I am so confused, when did Carver insult Harry's parents? Calling one a Templar doesn't sound like it o.O
9/26/2015 c2 Alex2909
i can already tell carver will be a pain in the future. nice choice for pairings for harry
i can already tell carver will be a pain in the future. nice choice for pairings for harry
9/26/2015 c1 Alex2909
kick ass story idea, really cant wait for how harry does in the dragon age world
kick ass story idea, really cant wait for how harry does in the dragon age world
8/5/2015 c3 Guest
not bad, but you need to decide on one arc at a time, im not saying you cant choose them all but it will make things rough. all for hiding but when exposed you might as well live up to it.
and plus the swamp near lothering has a few magic users who could provide training for him... especially since this seams like 2-3 years earlier then origins
not bad, but you need to decide on one arc at a time, im not saying you cant choose them all but it will make things rough. all for hiding but when exposed you might as well live up to it.
and plus the swamp near lothering has a few magic users who could provide training for him... especially since this seams like 2-3 years earlier then origins
8/5/2015 c2 13Have a Little Feith
I hope you delete the AN when you post the next chapter. It goes against the terms of services to have an author's note as a chapter, and I really don't want to see this story getting taken down due to a technicality.
13Have a Little FeithI hope you delete the AN when you post the next chapter. It goes against the terms of services to have an author's note as a chapter, and I really don't want to see this story getting taken down due to a technicality.