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4sLL
Heyyyy... that's very interesting!
So cute... Sakuragi comes back to relinquish memories!
So sweet! ^^
Eheheheh... definitely continue!
-sLL
4sLLHeyyyy... that's very interesting!
So cute... Sakuragi comes back to relinquish memories!
So sweet! ^^
Eheheheh... definitely continue!
-sLL
11/23/2002 c1 2Jo-sen7
Boring? This fic is just so beautiful in its own way. It kinda saddens me... The part where you told the story using the grafitti on the table was just wonderful.
A really beautiful fic... Why has it got to be your last? Its such a waste..
Jo-san
2Jo-sen7Boring? This fic is just so beautiful in its own way. It kinda saddens me... The part where you told the story using the grafitti on the table was just wonderful.
A really beautiful fic... Why has it got to be your last? Its such a waste..
Jo-san
11/23/2002 c1 6maemi
yo!
wow...
that was really nice...
i thought you've got a wrong story or something (cause i don't remember anyone named ichiro in SD) but as i read further...
it was really really nice...
i love reading vandals on my seat too...esp. when i'm bored...
and i vandal too...(why i'm even being proud of this fact, i don't really know)... to leave some "mark" or some kind of remembrance that i've been there or i sat there or whatever reason...
and the last part was nice too...sakuragi convincing ichiro to join the team...
so there...that's my review...
and is this really your last? if yes...at least you made a very good farewell fanfic. this could be your form of a "vandal" in ff.net...
COOLNESS!
JA! ^_^
p.s.
hope to hear from you again soon!
6maemiyo!
wow...
that was really nice...
i thought you've got a wrong story or something (cause i don't remember anyone named ichiro in SD) but as i read further...
it was really really nice...
i love reading vandals on my seat too...esp. when i'm bored...
and i vandal too...(why i'm even being proud of this fact, i don't really know)... to leave some "mark" or some kind of remembrance that i've been there or i sat there or whatever reason...
and the last part was nice too...sakuragi convincing ichiro to join the team...
so there...that's my review...
and is this really your last? if yes...at least you made a very good farewell fanfic. this could be your form of a "vandal" in ff.net...
COOLNESS!
JA! ^_^
p.s.
hope to hear from you again soon!
11/23/2002 c1 17Frack
That.. was..very sad for some reason. I don't think it was ment to be sad... was it? Ah, well, I guess it unearthed some of my own memories scribbling on a table...
17FrackThat.. was..very sad for some reason. I don't think it was ment to be sad... was it? Ah, well, I guess it unearthed some of my own memories scribbling on a table...
11/23/2002 c1 9Dinette
Oh... I know I'm not supposed to review my own fic (bad me) but what the hell.
Anyway, I stopped cuz I've gotten bored. I can memorise the entire storyline, no surprise after 1.1 years of fandom. For me with a walnut-sized attention span, that in itself is awfully amazing.
I didn't know people actually cared if I stopped o_0 but anyway I am. Fic writing gets kind of limiting too, in a way.
Good luck to all of you and long live Slam Dunk! :)
9DinetteOh... I know I'm not supposed to review my own fic (bad me) but what the hell.
Anyway, I stopped cuz I've gotten bored. I can memorise the entire storyline, no surprise after 1.1 years of fandom. For me with a walnut-sized attention span, that in itself is awfully amazing.
I didn't know people actually cared if I stopped o_0 but anyway I am. Fic writing gets kind of limiting too, in a way.
Good luck to all of you and long live Slam Dunk! :)
11/22/2002 c1 30Iluvenis Telperien
Wow. This is special. I like this fic! An outsider's POV of the story..and did you just say Anzai sensei died? T_T Well, I guess people die sooner or later...but this story is good. ^_^
Eddie
30Iluvenis TelperienWow. This is special. I like this fic! An outsider's POV of the story..and did you just say Anzai sensei died? T_T Well, I guess people die sooner or later...but this story is good. ^_^
Eddie
11/22/2002 c1 6Star of Recca
i enjoyed that very much. it's subtle, not in-your-face, but still very easy to follow. thank you for writing it... are you sure you want to stop writing?
[kitsune]
6Star of Reccai enjoyed that very much. it's subtle, not in-your-face, but still very easy to follow. thank you for writing it... are you sure you want to stop writing?
[kitsune]
11/22/2002 c1 15Midnight Crow
Wow, it's cool. It's unique. It's...different. I'll have to repeat what magenta blues said:
your story was so simple that it was outstanding...
Yup, that's right. Now, it doesn't matter if you continue this or not. I just wanted to say that ideas like this, and where the ideas come from, shouldn't be wasted. :)
This fic makes me love Shohoku more ^^ Kinda like what I feel whenever I watch the ending...
15Midnight CrowWow, it's cool. It's unique. It's...different. I'll have to repeat what magenta blues said:
your story was so simple that it was outstanding...
Yup, that's right. Now, it doesn't matter if you continue this or not. I just wanted to say that ideas like this, and where the ideas come from, shouldn't be wasted. :)
This fic makes me love Shohoku more ^^ Kinda like what I feel whenever I watch the ending...
11/22/2002 c1 sakurastarlight
Oooh, this is interesting. I like how you did the way the 'fall' of the b-ball club. Please continue, I'm dying to find out what happens next. ^^
Oooh, this is interesting. I like how you did the way the 'fall' of the b-ball club. Please continue, I'm dying to find out what happens next. ^^
11/22/2002 c1 magenta blues
one question. why are you going to stop writing?
becoz this fic is far from mundane... it's one of the most interesting non yaoi (well i only read non yaoi anyway), non romance slam dunk fics i've ever read.
Using the doodlings made on a table top to unfold the history behind it, was an excellent touch. the idea is original, the character you created is realistic and likeable, the flow and subtle humour in the story is great!
so why are you not writing anymore?
you wrote a story that everyone can understand and relate to. there was no need to go in depth to explain the story behind each drawing..
your story was so simple that it was outstanding...
you sure you want to stop writing? :)
one question. why are you going to stop writing?
becoz this fic is far from mundane... it's one of the most interesting non yaoi (well i only read non yaoi anyway), non romance slam dunk fics i've ever read.
Using the doodlings made on a table top to unfold the history behind it, was an excellent touch. the idea is original, the character you created is realistic and likeable, the flow and subtle humour in the story is great!
so why are you not writing anymore?
you wrote a story that everyone can understand and relate to. there was no need to go in depth to explain the story behind each drawing..
your story was so simple that it was outstanding...
you sure you want to stop writing? :)