for Steven Universe in: Illumination4/5/2015 c1 Guest
Don't understand why you needed to make a sequel to forged worlds you could have just kept updating it and are you going to make a sequel to this since it's completed? But besides that great job and keep up the great work
Don't understand why you needed to make a sequel to forged worlds you could have just kept updating it and are you going to make a sequel to this since it's completed? But besides that great job and keep up the great work
11/1/2014 c1 DrParanormal
I read your Forged Warriors fanfic but I never saw the thing about the sequal. Im just really glad your not gonna stop!
I read your Forged Warriors fanfic but I never saw the thing about the sequal. Im just really glad your not gonna stop!
10/31/2014 c1 
39mon-ra
Nice tie in with the Lapis arc. It not only fits, but it also makes sense in a way. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Also to your Shezow/Danny Phantom story as well.
39mon-raNice tie in with the Lapis arc. It not only fits, but it also makes sense in a way. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Also to your Shezow/Danny Phantom story as well.
10/30/2014 c1 6Monkey Typewriter
TOO MANY EXCLAMATION POINTS.
Not everything is exciting, neither should it be. Too many exclamation points can be super obnoxious for a reader.
Other than this and a few typos, no big issues. Just... Tone down the forced enthusiasm, okay?
Good Luck, and Happy FanFic-ing!
Monkey Typewriter
6Monkey TypewriterTOO MANY EXCLAMATION POINTS.
Not everything is exciting, neither should it be. Too many exclamation points can be super obnoxious for a reader.
Other than this and a few typos, no big issues. Just... Tone down the forced enthusiasm, okay?
Good Luck, and Happy FanFic-ing!
Monkey Typewriter