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11/28/2014 c7 AMANDA FAN
I really liked this one. I read it right after you posted but I was sick and did not review. I'm still sick and it's hard to write. Sorry!
I don't think romance will be a problem as long as it doesn't take over too much of the story.
Please come back soon!
11/20/2014 c7 Guest
Aw this is really good! I really love stories with Amanda/Olivia friendship and you're doing a wonderful job!
11/21/2014 c6 3Scarlet1964
You should definitely make it Rollaro.
11/20/2014 c7 Guest
Great chapter
11/20/2014 c7 outoftheashes88
This is so good! I love the end! I hope you update soon!
11/11/2014 c6 4LiaGrace
Love this! Apart from a couple of minor errors it's great! Wonderful writing, and good luck with the exams! :)
11/8/2014 c6 Guest
Thank you for the new chapter, it was wonderful! I love stories where Olivia takes care of Amanda too :) Good luck on your exams and I hope you're back with a new chapter soon!
11/8/2014 c6 Guest
11/7/2014 c6 AMANDA FAN
I can't get enough! Totally understand about your exams but please come back soon even for the little chapters! :)
11/6/2014 c5 csifan2002
wow this quite so good writing! I want read more of this story! please update soon as you can! perhaps i could read 3 or 4 more chapters of this story, its getting really good!
11/6/2014 c5 outoftheashes88
This story is so great, please keep adding chapters I love it!
11/6/2014 c5 Smileyface2508
Great story. I would love to read more of it. Please update again!
11/4/2014 c5 GeorgiePorgie2305
Loving the story so far looking forward to the next chapter :-)
11/3/2014 c5 Guest
11/3/2014 c5 AMANDA FAN
Wow! Who is this monster! You're really good at descriptions. I felt sick!
Because Amanda's attacker knows her somehow you could take this in some really dramatic directions by way of the case and by way of Amanda's psychological state.
Might I suggest she be sedated and when she wakes up doesn't remember (or rather is refusing to) remember the rape. Or she could refuse to speak for awhile. Don't be afraid to go wild!
I feel so sorry for Amanda. I wish Olivia could get her out of the hospital. I wish Amanda would let Olivia closer.
Thanks for the great chapter! Can't wait for another :)
God Bless!
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