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9/16/2016 c1 Pikachu79
Either they are both dead or just the baby. I just hope that this doesn't appear in the other story.
1/11/2016 c1 Guest
Hey first I love all your stories and have constantly reviewed them. But this one sadly is somewhat not so good. I mean this is supposed to be as a one-shot but it appears more of as a prelude to another story. It does nothing but to leave us hanging in the middle with all questions and everything. Not so happy with this. Just a genuine review.
1/8/2016 c1 RuneFallenAngel
AW HELL! THE BABY! DX

Rune (The Fallen Angel)
1/5/2015 c1 Nataly SkyPot
Bueno.
11/7/2014 c1 3skywiseskychan
I'm sorry but I have to say that this story if intended as a one shot is a failure.

It has no real purpose. It does not present a resolution for Harry, for her attacker, for the child. So basically we are left with a story which presents us with no resolution and no motive for anything.

Even a hint of who the attacker was might make it better, or a resolution in what happened to that attacker. But as it sits there isn't really a single thing that is resolved counting the situation that is created.

Sorry.
11/5/2014 c1 anonymousx
Nuuuuuuuuul! Which bitch did it? Kick their ass, Sherlock! KICK THEIR ASS!
11/3/2014 c1 12EDelta88
well that's rather foreboding...
11/1/2014 c1 Tommy14
I hope we see what happens next.
11/1/2014 c1 47Padfootette
Loved it

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