for The Blond Haired Wizard3/20/2019 c3 Borello
interesting idea
interesting idea
9/2/2018 c3 Guest
Please continue this story.
Please continue this story.
2/5/2018 c1 Guest
The first few paragraphs annoyed me...
Really, life for people living in London was good except for one person? London isn't a bloody Utopia mate, be rational.
The first few paragraphs annoyed me...
Really, life for people living in London was good except for one person? London isn't a bloody Utopia mate, be rational.
9/17/2017 c3 Guest
please make more chapters on this fanfiction its amazing...the cliff hanger is killing me
please make more chapters on this fanfiction its amazing...the cliff hanger is killing me
4/22/2017 c3 
13N7 Greek-Valkyrie
Oh, come on! So much promise, besides I want to know how Hermione will react when she learns the truth of Naruto's past. I bet it will clear the way for a strong friendship and a building block for a future relationship.
13N7 Greek-ValkyrieOh, come on! So much promise, besides I want to know how Hermione will react when she learns the truth of Naruto's past. I bet it will clear the way for a strong friendship and a building block for a future relationship.
3/18/2017 c3 3jiubantai-taicho
Excellent story I really LOVED your idea AND your writing style so please I BEG you to continue it PLEASE continue updating it
3jiubantai-taichoExcellent story I really LOVED your idea AND your writing style so please I BEG you to continue it PLEASE continue updating it
1/18/2017 c3 Guest
please continue this fanfiction it amazing and awesome
please continue this fanfiction it amazing and awesome
6/12/2016 c3 Guest
First you should call it Hinduism and second Kali is the represnetation of Time, Change, Power, Creation, Preservation, and Destruction
First you should call it Hinduism and second Kali is the represnetation of Time, Change, Power, Creation, Preservation, and Destruction
5/11/2015 c1 2NhaTrang
Zzzzzzzzzzzzz. Well, at least (for the most part) you use proper spelling, grammar and punctuation. There's something.
2NhaTrangZzzzzzzzzzzzz. Well, at least (for the most part) you use proper spelling, grammar and punctuation. There's something.
4/30/2015 c3 Guest
Yo is this story abandoned or something? It's been months now and still no update.
This story was looking pretty good aswell...
Yo is this story abandoned or something? It's been months now and still no update.
This story was looking pretty good aswell...
3/21/2015 c1 19Smiling Seshat
There are some punctuation mistakes, and I don't think you need to mention that a British boy named Charlie has a British accent. That's kind've a given, and makes me want to say 'Captain Obvious'.
19Smiling SeshatThere are some punctuation mistakes, and I don't think you need to mention that a British boy named Charlie has a British accent. That's kind've a given, and makes me want to say 'Captain Obvious'.
1/24/2015 c1 Guest
Just wondering, when you say "santé", your referring to "good health" in French right?
Just wondering, when you say "santé", your referring to "good health" in French right?