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11/3/2014 c2 Granet
I like this chapter overall..even if a bit sad with Ronald but things happen. Anyway. Will the crashed infinity be turned into village? With people moving in...and when I say moving in I mean around the cut in half ship. Cause I've seen something similar to this from a story called "World of Warcraft Halo" good story sadly it was abandoned but that's just my opinion of what I think would happen. Hope to see more
11/1/2014 c1 Silent howl
Oh snap! Chief lost to the didact?! That's like worst then loosing in general I'm officially on board for this story!
11/1/2014 c1 the rakiat
awesome, i would tell you some ideas but i think you said you have already completed it,but i incist so...PLEASE DO MC MASTER OF NARUTO( captaian obius telling me of course dumbass) but from seeing the trailer i also expect to be the son/ daughter of MC and Tsunade and it will be awesome too but you understand me right? please respond
11/2/2014 c1 SPARTAN-626
Ok this is off to a great start, has great potential and I'm looking forward to see what comes next. I'm looking to see when Chief comes into contact with the naruto characters and the reactions they will have for each other. Hope Chief can use chakra in the future and if he's getting paired I vote for Tsunade. Anyway great work so far keep it up and hope to see more soon.
11/2/2014 c1 Nakiromi yuri
Awesome prologue man I'm hoping to see how this story goes
11/2/2014 c1 MrWinteck
Will you give john chakra? And how will you deal with the weapons issue? Johns weapons would completely destroy the balance of naruto verse. Because it doesnt matter if you can control the elements when your shot in the face with a high caliber sniper from kilometers far away, you would not be able do to jack shit against that! Anyway if you can solve these problems without to much trolling around logic them i think your story will be awesome
11/1/2014 c1 Densho
Definatly looking forward to more, can not wait for another chapter. :D
11/1/2014 c1 jjcoop95
Looks good and looking foreword to more of your work. Also did you saw my comment in the trailer about the Chief possible abilities for this story.
11/1/2014 c1 Granet
Hah I like how you kept narutos world animatied and how the cheif noticed it...wait does that mean he's breaking the 4th wall?..well other than that I enjoyed this. Hope you keep writing
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