9/30/2016 c6 Guest
Oh my god! I just found this and oh my god is it good! I hope this continues beucase i love it!
Oh my god! I just found this and oh my god is it good! I hope this continues beucase i love it!
8/21/2016 c6 70Celgress
Sorry to hear about your problems. My heart goes out to you and your husband.
I enjoyed this chapter it had further character development. Which is always a plus. In addition to a nice cliff hanger ending. How will the boys get out of this one?
Sorry to hear about your problems. My heart goes out to you and your husband.
I enjoyed this chapter it had further character development. Which is always a plus. In addition to a nice cliff hanger ending. How will the boys get out of this one?
8/21/2016 c6 203BubblyShell22
Oh man, this definitely isn't good for the boys. I hope they can get out of this mess soon and I wonder what Lotus will do for them. I love the idea of Donnie being a klepto as it suits him. Nicely done on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Oh man, this definitely isn't good for the boys. I hope they can get out of this mess soon and I wonder what Lotus will do for them. I love the idea of Donnie being a klepto as it suits him. Nicely done on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
8/18/2015 c5 70Celgress
Loved the confrontaion between Lotus and Leonardo, it was very well done. I can't wait to read what Leo and Don each have in mind.
Loved the confrontaion between Lotus and Leonardo, it was very well done. I can't wait to read what Leo and Don each have in mind.
8/17/2015 c5 26SewerSurfin
Man I just love this so much! Leo and Lotus were just so awesome. He's so loyal, to a fault. They all think they owe that evil Splinter.
Man I just love this so much! Leo and Lotus were just so awesome. He's so loyal, to a fault. They all think they owe that evil Splinter.
8/17/2015 c5 203BubblyShell22
Awesome chapter. Loved the battle with Leo and Lotus and I can see Lotus caring for him and wanting to make things right. I think he should take her offer and escape Splinter along with his brothers. I'm sure they'd be all for it if they really wanted to be. Nicely done on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Awesome chapter. Loved the battle with Leo and Lotus and I can see Lotus caring for him and wanting to make things right. I think he should take her offer and escape Splinter along with his brothers. I'm sure they'd be all for it if they really wanted to be. Nicely done on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
8/17/2015 c5 82SleepingSeeker
Great action scene between Lotus and Leonardo. I thought the fight was very clear and flowed smoothly! Giving us a glimpse into each boy's inner conflict brings a nice layer to this story :)
Great action scene between Lotus and Leonardo. I thought the fight was very clear and flowed smoothly! Giving us a glimpse into each boy's inner conflict brings a nice layer to this story :)
3/4/2015 c4 SleepingSeeker
What an intense chapter. Poor Leo, living with the shame and guilt of that monster abusing him, and now his brother discovers his shame! Great chapter, Duckie!
What an intense chapter. Poor Leo, living with the shame and guilt of that monster abusing him, and now his brother discovers his shame! Great chapter, Duckie!
3/3/2015 c4 70Celgress
Wow what an emotionally powerful, heart wrenching scene between Leonardo and Raphael. Although a dark story I am truly enjoying this tale. I commend you on making the bold choice to write such a piece. I'm not sure I could do the same.
Wow what an emotionally powerful, heart wrenching scene between Leonardo and Raphael. Although a dark story I am truly enjoying this tale. I commend you on making the bold choice to write such a piece. I'm not sure I could do the same.
3/2/2015 c4 26SewerSurfin
OMG I just love this so much. This whole AU you have here is amazing. The turtles' personalities are still true to them, but twisted in such a way. And poor Leo! What did you do to him! :*( I so cannot wait for more of this! It's GREAT GREAT GREAT!
OMG I just love this so much. This whole AU you have here is amazing. The turtles' personalities are still true to them, but twisted in such a way. And poor Leo! What did you do to him! :*( I so cannot wait for more of this! It's GREAT GREAT GREAT!
3/2/2015 c4 52ravenshell
Man, you weren't kidding about dark! Great chapter! Can't wait for more! (But will...)
R/s
Man, you weren't kidding about dark! Great chapter! Can't wait for more! (But will...)
R/s
3/2/2015 c4 203BubblyShell22
Whoa. I never saw THAT coming. Poor Leo! I can see why Raph doesn't want to let it slide, but something like this should be addressed no matter what. Splinter is one sick dude for sure. Nicely done on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Whoa. I never saw THAT coming. Poor Leo! I can see why Raph doesn't want to let it slide, but something like this should be addressed no matter what. Splinter is one sick dude for sure. Nicely done on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
1/24/2015 c3 52ravenshell
This is really interesting, and I can't wait to see where you take it from here! I especially liked seeing the direct consequences leading to Mikey's descent into depravity. (Poor Klunk...) It's certainly also a change of pace to get to root for the former big-bad and boo the former heroes.
This is really interesting, and I can't wait to see where you take it from here! I especially liked seeing the direct consequences leading to Mikey's descent into depravity. (Poor Klunk...) It's certainly also a change of pace to get to root for the former big-bad and boo the former heroes.