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10/9/2015 c1 LectroMagnet
I really like your incorporation of a new character named Metaru! You have done a nice job building up his description and explaining how he has been troubled by the bully. I can't wait to find out if he is going to be attacked or captured! That makes for a good cliffhanger!
7/29/2015 c5 5Planar-Walking-Entertainment
Please continue, i'd like to see more!
7/15/2015 c5 Guest
So, a Mobian version of Metal/Neo Metal? Why were they looking for Metal's blueprints anyway? And how do they know the name Metaru?
6/29/2015 c4 5cottoncandy903
cool! I rly like this!

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