for Cliché, huh?7/18/2017 c10 Anonymous
Loved it!
Loved it!
1/19/2017 c10 rayneee
Thank God Natsu stayed and thank God I've found this gem after all the digging :D. Anyway, I totally adore this story. So insightful. I was trying not to cry while reading because damn.. every chapter is so depressing that's why I was really glad you made Natsu stay at the end. Hurray for the happy ending! This is really a job well done ;D
Thank God Natsu stayed and thank God I've found this gem after all the digging :D. Anyway, I totally adore this story. So insightful. I was trying not to cry while reading because damn.. every chapter is so depressing that's why I was really glad you made Natsu stay at the end. Hurray for the happy ending! This is really a job well done ;D
1/12/2015 c10 Asdffgn mage
Enjoyable and insightful. Hope you can get those typos edited. It's kinda disappointing that little silly grammar error could discourage a person to read so please have time to do so. More power to you my friend
Enjoyable and insightful. Hope you can get those typos edited. It's kinda disappointing that little silly grammar error could discourage a person to read so please have time to do so. More power to you my friend
1/12/2015 c9 Asdfgh mage
I love that when natsu nnd lucy met for this first time in reading this the first conversations is the title
I love that when natsu nnd lucy met for this first time in reading this the first conversations is the title
1/12/2015 c8 Asdfgh mage
Hooo! This really tells us about how dares could lead up tp maaany thiings good story
Hooo! This really tells us about how dares could lead up tp maaany thiings good story
1/10/2015 c2 Asdfgh mage
Oh i like how this is written but the typos kinda destroys the work in some scale. Anyway, it's a good work!
Oh i like how this is written but the typos kinda destroys the work in some scale. Anyway, it's a good work!
1/10/2015 c1 Asdfgh mage
Hmmm hates not being with his best friend? i am sure that ain't grayq
Hmmm hates not being with his best friend? i am sure that ain't grayq
1/6/2015 c10 Guest
This was so cute! I really loved it. Thumbs up! :-)
This was so cute! I really loved it. Thumbs up! :-)
12/30/2014 c8 CupcakeGirl633
Haha love this. This story is really sad though, but I guess that's what makes it beautiful... I can't wait to see what will happen. Trying not to cry here...
Haha love this. This story is really sad though, but I guess that's what makes it beautiful... I can't wait to see what will happen. Trying not to cry here...
12/25/2014 c10 
2Takamiya Sakura
I reaally thought that Natsu would leave..
Well, Natsu is Natsu, and Natsu is full of surprises as always :)
Merryy Christmas! _
2Takamiya SakuraI reaally thought that Natsu would leave..
Well, Natsu is Natsu, and Natsu is full of surprises as always :)
Merryy Christmas! _
11/13/2014 c4 EclipticChaos
Still good as always!
Still good as always!
11/10/2014 c2 EclipticChaos
Very good!
Very good!
11/10/2014 c1 EclipticChaos
Short, but good! I like so far!
Short, but good! I like so far!