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11/5/2014 c1 72Crazee Canadia
Ah, yes, I do quite adore this. Luigi seems calm here, knowing what Waluigi is doing, I actually kind of like it.
In some places I feel that the are some lack in details, such as the paragraph that starts "Watching the two brothers talking..." I kind of feel using that paragraph to transition to Waluigi heading home was a tad bit rushed and small.

Otherwise, a good read overall!

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