for Mancipium1/12/2021 c4 Guest
enjoyed the story. wondering where it was headed
enjoyed the story. wondering where it was headed
4/10/2019 c4 
2KrayKrayKat
Oh my gosh! What the hell is happening?! I need to know author-san! Please don't keep us waiting much longer!
2KrayKrayKatOh my gosh! What the hell is happening?! I need to know author-san! Please don't keep us waiting much longer!
4/10/2019 c3 KrayKrayKat
Well, Orihime can try rebelling too? I'm surprised Sora isn't on her side and I wonder whats up with Rangiku and Sosuke...she's always on Hime's side but is he? I love that everything is so mysterious but you keep our faith in Rukia with that last exchange because I would be so irrevocably mad at her and Ichigo!
I haven't been on this site in forever but yay Ichihime finally went canon, and this is way too late, but I love celebrating it ;)
Well, Orihime can try rebelling too? I'm surprised Sora isn't on her side and I wonder whats up with Rangiku and Sosuke...she's always on Hime's side but is he? I love that everything is so mysterious but you keep our faith in Rukia with that last exchange because I would be so irrevocably mad at her and Ichigo!
I haven't been on this site in forever but yay Ichihime finally went canon, and this is way too late, but I love celebrating it ;)
8/27/2017 c4 Guest
Please update! This is a very interesting story. I want to know what Masaki's and Rangiku's plan is. Also, I want to know how ichigo and Orihime will get together at the end.
Please update! This is a very interesting story. I want to know what Masaki's and Rangiku's plan is. Also, I want to know how ichigo and Orihime will get together at the end.
4/24/2017 c4 guest
ah! I miss this story.. And Howls under the full moon too.. I want to know what will happen next. Is Orihime pregnant? What Ichigo will do?
I love their relationship and you're an amazing writter, I can't stop reading, your stories are like a drug, please update
ah! I miss this story.. And Howls under the full moon too.. I want to know what will happen next. Is Orihime pregnant? What Ichigo will do?
I love their relationship and you're an amazing writter, I can't stop reading, your stories are like a drug, please update
3/19/2016 c4 12zorojurotheronin
Hey berry, I could get you some *looks suspiciously at both sides* *whispers* souls... for inspiration... you know... so you update this one
*runs away*
12zorojurotheroninHey berry, I could get you some *looks suspiciously at both sides* *whispers* souls... for inspiration... you know... so you update this one
*runs away*
2/26/2016 c4 vidanime
This is one super suspense that you have created. Come on don't stop. It's been way too long since u have updated. What will Ichigo do and what have misaki and ran planned
This is one super suspense that you have created. Come on don't stop. It's been way too long since u have updated. What will Ichigo do and what have misaki and ran planned
8/25/2015 c3 Firework's Feelings
Awesome chapter. Awesome chapter. So Rukia going to get them back together. I'm loving the plot allready.
Awesome chapter. Awesome chapter. So Rukia going to get them back together. I'm loving the plot allready.
8/23/2015 c4 blue moon
Holy hell, what did those two do? What are they up to?
I really hope Masaki is going to be okay! I love her very much!
And what was that Rangiku say? I'm really worries now... She refers Orihime as *her* daughter? It stuck to me...
And something else, Masaki and Rangiku are cousins right? So Orihime and Ichigo are cousins as well? They are related, is it okay for them to be together?
Then we have Ichi beating people up. Like, honestly, child, wth? Don't beat up people when you are moody...
And Hime... Usually some women bleed in the beginning of their pregnancies, usually the ones that are being mothers for the first time, so I'm really hanging from a thread here...I hope for a child...so he can have a reason to come back to her...
Holy hell, what did those two do? What are they up to?
I really hope Masaki is going to be okay! I love her very much!
And what was that Rangiku say? I'm really worries now... She refers Orihime as *her* daughter? It stuck to me...
And something else, Masaki and Rangiku are cousins right? So Orihime and Ichigo are cousins as well? They are related, is it okay for them to be together?
Then we have Ichi beating people up. Like, honestly, child, wth? Don't beat up people when you are moody...
And Hime... Usually some women bleed in the beginning of their pregnancies, usually the ones that are being mothers for the first time, so I'm really hanging from a thread here...I hope for a child...so he can have a reason to come back to her...
8/23/2015 c3 blue moon
Okay, I get that at the end that was Rukia right? Well Hell, I'm happy she's helping this thing go on, like seriously! Ichigo pissed me off in this chapter!
Stop acting like a clotpole Ichigo and go get your woman already! Like seriously wth!
No serious grammar mistakes and your vocabulary it's plenty okay so no need to worry. Worry that I'm gonna come for your head if Hime and Ichi won't be getting back together soon!
Though, seeing as how possessive he has become, Ichi won't stay away for too much...
Okay, I get that at the end that was Rukia right? Well Hell, I'm happy she's helping this thing go on, like seriously! Ichigo pissed me off in this chapter!
Stop acting like a clotpole Ichigo and go get your woman already! Like seriously wth!
No serious grammar mistakes and your vocabulary it's plenty okay so no need to worry. Worry that I'm gonna come for your head if Hime and Ichi won't be getting back together soon!
Though, seeing as how possessive he has become, Ichi won't stay away for too much...
8/21/2015 c2 blue moon
What happened to Masaki? I'm worried about her now! And Orihime is engaged to Tsukishima.. I don't think Ichigo will like it at all. And why do I think Sora had something to do with it? It'll be the perfect way to keep his rival away from Orihime and it makes me wonder what happened between them...
And Rangiku, its a surprise really, but a pleasant one! An interesting pair..and as you wrote those two are quite lethal on their own, imagine them together..!
What happened to Masaki? I'm worried about her now! And Orihime is engaged to Tsukishima.. I don't think Ichigo will like it at all. And why do I think Sora had something to do with it? It'll be the perfect way to keep his rival away from Orihime and it makes me wonder what happened between them...
And Rangiku, its a surprise really, but a pleasant one! An interesting pair..and as you wrote those two are quite lethal on their own, imagine them together..!
8/21/2015 c1 blue moon
Very hard to find someone who shares the same otps as you do these days...
I love IchiHime pair, not my top of Bleach but lovably cute, and AUs have always had a soft spot in my heart! I love Mafia/Yakuza themes and this story is going to be awesome. I can feel success around!
Beautifully written, the characters are well laid out for all to see, mystery is well wrapped as well!
I only hope everything is going to be okay for them! Masaki is one of my faves, and having a major role here is going to be very exciting for me! I really hope no one will die...well from the mains I mean...
Very hard to find someone who shares the same otps as you do these days...
I love IchiHime pair, not my top of Bleach but lovably cute, and AUs have always had a soft spot in my heart! I love Mafia/Yakuza themes and this story is going to be awesome. I can feel success around!
Beautifully written, the characters are well laid out for all to see, mystery is well wrapped as well!
I only hope everything is going to be okay for them! Masaki is one of my faves, and having a major role here is going to be very exciting for me! I really hope no one will die...well from the mains I mean...