10/27/2024 c10 Guest
Man your OCs suck, your inented story is boring, and your comedy is lame. The good part is that this fic is abandoned
Man your OCs suck, your inented story is boring, and your comedy is lame. The good part is that this fic is abandoned
10/27/2024 c8 Guest
Boring
Boring
11/21/2023 c6 2anonymous crossovers
I don't know why people just put Naruto in these type of crossover as to just push him with no real effort to make a Little original.
I don't know why people just put Naruto in these type of crossover as to just push him with no real effort to make a Little original.
6/3/2022 c10 25killerssg
Amazing chapter and like where it is going. Finally those two admitted their feelings for each other! That took forever and felt it was appropriate with how everything went. Her finding out about the Kyuubi would terrify anyone else if it would've been literally anyone else.
Amazing chapter and like where it is going. Finally those two admitted their feelings for each other! That took forever and felt it was appropriate with how everything went. Her finding out about the Kyuubi would terrify anyone else if it would've been literally anyone else.
7/29/2020 c2 SeorCum
Great story. Only thing i suggest is a wider range of vocabulary. The word "buxom" was used alot. There are lots of other words you could try. Keep up the good work!
Great story. Only thing i suggest is a wider range of vocabulary. The word "buxom" was used alot. There are lots of other words you could try. Keep up the good work!
12/24/2019 c10 80YeagerMeister31
Well, this was a very amusing chapter a female Natsu shivers just thinking about it, there was a lot of laughs lol, the ending was funny also, shame there's not been an update in 2 years love the story oh well.
Well, this was a very amusing chapter a female Natsu shivers just thinking about it, there was a lot of laughs lol, the ending was funny also, shame there's not been an update in 2 years love the story oh well.
12/23/2019 c9 YeagerMeister31
Well, that was pretty cool always funny when there's body switches Mira finding out the truth about Naruto and the Kyubi was interesting, the enemies part was Ok I suppose, full of arrogant ahole's but what's new, the lemon was nice also NaruMira is a cute couple my second fav Naruto/Fairy Tail croosover pairing after NaruErza, I wonder what happens next will Naruto eventually return home or will he stay who knows, maybe he'll return home then after everything is settled return to Mira who knows.
Well, that was pretty cool always funny when there's body switches Mira finding out the truth about Naruto and the Kyubi was interesting, the enemies part was Ok I suppose, full of arrogant ahole's but what's new, the lemon was nice also NaruMira is a cute couple my second fav Naruto/Fairy Tail croosover pairing after NaruErza, I wonder what happens next will Naruto eventually return home or will he stay who knows, maybe he'll return home then after everything is settled return to Mira who knows.
12/22/2019 c8 YeagerMeister31
Well, that was certainly different than canon but still cool, wonder what happens next should be interesting.
Well, that was certainly different than canon but still cool, wonder what happens next should be interesting.
12/21/2019 c7 YeagerMeister31
Well, this was pretty cool wonder how this arc will change with Naruto and Claire in it.
Well, this was pretty cool wonder how this arc will change with Naruto and Claire in it.