for Linger3/9/2016 c1 
3xBitterSweetDreamsx
Now if this only happen in the anime Great story, think you portray tenten's emotions well
3xBitterSweetDreamsxNow if this only happen in the anime Great story, think you portray tenten's emotions well
11/16/2014 c1 13This Modern Glitch
This story, I needed it. The ending just made everything so much better, made everythig okay. It was wonderful :)
13This Modern GlitchThis story, I needed it. The ending just made everything so much better, made everythig okay. It was wonderful :)
11/9/2014 c1 78Aquarius Galuxy
awwwww that was a nice ending! happy and fluffy, I like. The first two parts were grounding, very solemn, and very real. I like how you portrayed Tenten's emotions in them.
Do write more! I enjoyed this a lot :)
78Aquarius Galuxyawwwww that was a nice ending! happy and fluffy, I like. The first two parts were grounding, very solemn, and very real. I like how you portrayed Tenten's emotions in them.
Do write more! I enjoyed this a lot :)
11/9/2014 c1 5gracie-buns
T_T... i believe this with all of my heart T_T... nejiten
this is truly what happened
5gracie-bunsT_T... i believe this with all of my heart T_T... nejiten
this is truly what happened
11/9/2014 c1 21Maayou
I loved it, everything was realistic and i loved the nejiten part at the end. I'm so angry at Kishimoto that i wanna break things. The only couple that deserved to be canon, he kills it. I'm so pissed. Anyway great one shot, I hope that you'll write more. :)
21MaayouI loved it, everything was realistic and i loved the nejiten part at the end. I'm so angry at Kishimoto that i wanna break things. The only couple that deserved to be canon, he kills it. I'm so pissed. Anyway great one shot, I hope that you'll write more. :)
11/9/2014 c1 8akirasatsuna
You had me crying towards the end. And i agree, NejiTen deserved so much more. :)
8akirasatsunaYou had me crying towards the end. And i agree, NejiTen deserved so much more. :)
11/9/2014 c1 FruitySmell
Any chance that last part could be canon instead? Because Kishi just falcon-punched me in the gut and ripped my heart out with that ending :(
Any chance that last part could be canon instead? Because Kishi just falcon-punched me in the gut and ripped my heart out with that ending :(