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3/9/2016 c1 3xBitterSweetDreamsx
Now if this only happen in the anime Great story, think you portray tenten's emotions well
11/16/2014 c1 13This Modern Glitch
This story, I needed it. The ending just made everything so much better, made everythig okay. It was wonderful :)
11/9/2014 c1 78Aquarius Galuxy
awwwww that was a nice ending! happy and fluffy, I like. The first two parts were grounding, very solemn, and very real. I like how you portrayed Tenten's emotions in them.

Do write more! I enjoyed this a lot :)
11/9/2014 c1 5gracie-buns
T_T... i believe this with all of my heart T_T... nejiten
this is truly what happened
11/9/2014 c1 21Maayou
I loved it, everything was realistic and i loved the nejiten part at the end. I'm so angry at Kishimoto that i wanna break things. The only couple that deserved to be canon, he kills it. I'm so pissed. Anyway great one shot, I hope that you'll write more. :)
11/9/2014 c1 8akirasatsuna
You had me crying towards the end. And i agree, NejiTen deserved so much more. :)
11/9/2014 c1 FruitySmell
Any chance that last part could be canon instead? Because Kishi just falcon-punched me in the gut and ripped my heart out with that ending :(

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