for Mortal Intervention2/8/2016 c12 Guest
I heard about this before in a YouTube video! (The part with the girl and the braid.) didn't hear about the legs though.
I heard about this before in a YouTube video! (The part with the girl and the braid.) didn't hear about the legs though.
1/28/2016 c14 Guest
YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE! PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSE?;)
YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE! PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSE?;)
1/28/2016 c14 Andrea
YOU NEED TO WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER. This is definitely on my top 3 fanfics of all time. I refuse to let you abandon it. You better write more, or I'll find you, and make you do it! ;p
YOU NEED TO WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER. This is definitely on my top 3 fanfics of all time. I refuse to let you abandon it. You better write more, or I'll find you, and make you do it! ;p
1/24/2016 c14 
1sky-full-of-raindrops
Hello, do you feel like writing? Because I feel like FINDING OUT WHAT'S HAPPENING NEXT!
1sky-full-of-raindropsHello, do you feel like writing? Because I feel like FINDING OUT WHAT'S HAPPENING NEXT!
11/24/2015 c1 StoneTheLoner
Really not liking the direction this is headed. Suddenly and with no explanation given demi gods can be tracked? Demi gods and all supernaturals have that cloaking thing that hides them from regular humans right? Forgot what it's called... Anyway, why is that suddenly not working? The thing that makes normal's see a baseball bat when in reality it's a sword? A monster destroying things getting twisted into an out of control semi truck in the minds of regular people. THAT thing. You just going to forget about that and move on?
Really not liking the direction this is headed. Suddenly and with no explanation given demi gods can be tracked? Demi gods and all supernaturals have that cloaking thing that hides them from regular humans right? Forgot what it's called... Anyway, why is that suddenly not working? The thing that makes normal's see a baseball bat when in reality it's a sword? A monster destroying things getting twisted into an out of control semi truck in the minds of regular people. THAT thing. You just going to forget about that and move on?
11/9/2015 c14 random
Where is the next chapter?
Where is the next chapter?
10/31/2015 c1 Guest
Yo hurry up with the next chapter
Yo hurry up with the next chapter
10/29/2015 c14 Guest
Yo hurry up with the next chapter
Yo hurry up with the next chapter
10/24/2015 c8 Blinded in a bolthole
Here comes God of Thunder! Who is not a pansy fellow in a dress but a hammer-wielding genocidal maniac!
Here comes God of Thunder! Who is not a pansy fellow in a dress but a hammer-wielding genocidal maniac!