for Harry Potter: An Ancient's Journey By keiranhalcyon20106/27 c2 avarath1
I hope that pale boy at Malkins wasnt Malfoy because Harry is at Diagon Alley a week earlier than he would have in canon
I hope that pale boy at Malkins wasnt Malfoy because Harry is at Diagon Alley a week earlier than he would have in canon
3/30 c43 
4viningc
I have enjoyed your story so far and hope your muse allows you to start working on this again.
4viningcI have enjoyed your story so far and hope your muse allows you to start working on this again.
2/19 c44 viningc
You have this marked as complete but it definitely has a way to go before true completion. I hope your muse regains its impetus and you are able to truly complete this story.
Thank you for all you’ve done so far.
You have this marked as complete but it definitely has a way to go before true completion. I hope your muse regains its impetus and you are able to truly complete this story.
Thank you for all you’ve done so far.
1/17 c15 Thanatos
I first want to say that I really enjoyed your story, but this part-(wizarding world) is rather redundant in my mind. I mean Harry is dealing with helping the SGC defend earth against the Goa'uld Systems Lords. Anyone of them would make Voldemort look like an incompetent hack slash five year-old throwing a tantrum.
Who cares about some isolated insular and frankly inbred population of human magicals. Let wizarding Britain implode; it frankly serves them right. It's not like Harry be condemming all of wizard-kind to extinction; i.e magical America, Asia and the rest of the world would still be fine. An please don't start with the threat of Voldemort. As frankly he is over-hyped. He could never take over the whole world; Gellert Grindelwald on the other hand I'd admit had a fair chance at it, but never Voldemort.
No offence to ascended Oma Desala, but Harry's task! I'm mean seriously! That prophecy is nothing more than self-fulfilling garbage, and the only reason it had any validity to it was that both Moldywart and Bumbledore stupidly held it as the gospel truth.
In any case my rant is not meant to be against your story but rather the cannon HP-universe-(Book/movies) that JKR created. Thank you for taking the time to write this story I really enjoyed it.
I first want to say that I really enjoyed your story, but this part-(wizarding world) is rather redundant in my mind. I mean Harry is dealing with helping the SGC defend earth against the Goa'uld Systems Lords. Anyone of them would make Voldemort look like an incompetent hack slash five year-old throwing a tantrum.
Who cares about some isolated insular and frankly inbred population of human magicals. Let wizarding Britain implode; it frankly serves them right. It's not like Harry be condemming all of wizard-kind to extinction; i.e magical America, Asia and the rest of the world would still be fine. An please don't start with the threat of Voldemort. As frankly he is over-hyped. He could never take over the whole world; Gellert Grindelwald on the other hand I'd admit had a fair chance at it, but never Voldemort.
No offence to ascended Oma Desala, but Harry's task! I'm mean seriously! That prophecy is nothing more than self-fulfilling garbage, and the only reason it had any validity to it was that both Moldywart and Bumbledore stupidly held it as the gospel truth.
In any case my rant is not meant to be against your story but rather the cannon HP-universe-(Book/movies) that JKR created. Thank you for taking the time to write this story I really enjoyed it.
1/14 c15 2Silver0Shard
Harry’s decision to impersonate his clone is a rather unfortunate one. Him coming out and revealing the “cosmic truth” to wizards would have been far, far more interesting. As it is, his game of pretense feels at best tedious and at worst insulting (both to the setting and the readers). Someone who has managed to earn Asgards’ respect should be above such petty and short-sighted deception, even if they avoid revealing the entire truth.
2Silver0ShardHarry’s decision to impersonate his clone is a rather unfortunate one. Him coming out and revealing the “cosmic truth” to wizards would have been far, far more interesting. As it is, his game of pretense feels at best tedious and at worst insulting (both to the setting and the readers). Someone who has managed to earn Asgards’ respect should be above such petty and short-sighted deception, even if they avoid revealing the entire truth.
8/14/2023 c44 Guest
good story
good story
8/14/2023 c43 Guest
good story but al gore sucks
good story but al gore sucks
2/26/2023 c1 4J flood
please do not use scene break. because those of us that are blind use Text-to-Speech engine to read the story and it interferes with the flow of the story, please take that into consideration when you do a story, when some of your readers will be blind
4J floodplease do not use scene break. because those of us that are blind use Text-to-Speech engine to read the story and it interferes with the flow of the story, please take that into consideration when you do a story, when some of your readers will be blind
10/30/2022 c44 2Sarek5959
Its a damn shame he hasn't continued this one.. I've read it three or four times and it's still a great story!
2Sarek5959Its a damn shame he hasn't continued this one.. I've read it three or four times and it's still a great story!
5/8/2022 c1 2mcguire.elizabeth.99990000
I saw gators first and I know he stole it but how come I can get into his story but fall asleep trying to get through the original first chapters of the story. yes he should have could have but didn't give the original creator credit for the story and for that I hate him. but I just don't understand how I can't get into the original story damn it.
2mcguire.elizabeth.99990000I saw gators first and I know he stole it but how come I can get into his story but fall asleep trying to get through the original first chapters of the story. yes he should have could have but didn't give the original creator credit for the story and for that I hate him. but I just don't understand how I can't get into the original story damn it.
1/23/2022 c12 khatre
Im just glad we did not have to put up with the sanctimonious Air Force Sticker speech ...
Im just glad we did not have to put up with the sanctimonious Air Force Sticker speech ...