for Harry Potter: An Ancient's Journey By keiranhalcyon201012/30/2021 c35 fuunu
Why didn't they ask the Asgard to go they could have had ships there in a few minutes, I mean they brought a fleet yet they seem to be doing little if nothing., and while Abados wasn't a protected planet they still would have went to keep Anubis from getting the eye
Why didn't they ask the Asgard to go they could have had ships there in a few minutes, I mean they brought a fleet yet they seem to be doing little if nothing., and while Abados wasn't a protected planet they still would have went to keep Anubis from getting the eye
10/24/2021 c10 erozoth
I tried but this is just a copy\rewrite of the SG-1 script, add HP to it (no magic, because...) or don't same path, same outcome.
I tried but this is just a copy\rewrite of the SG-1 script, add HP to it (no magic, because...) or don't same path, same outcome.
10/24/2021 c9 erozoth
This is not a cliffhanger since I watched the TV show it seems almost guarantee I know what will happen. Boring.
This is not a cliffhanger since I watched the TV show it seems almost guarantee I know what will happen. Boring.
10/23/2021 c6 erozoth
I find this novel, up to here, boring. It's like copying school homework from the internet, lets copy it but rewrite it in my own words.
This is basically word for word the SG-1 script. HP is there just for not being an OC or SI. Magic is non existent, basically coming up with some stupid excuse to not use it. He could have easily used it and said it was part of the experiment by Loki.
So, being very familiar with SG-1 I already know the plot, HP kinda, maybe, sometimes saves a bit of time is pointless.
I find this novel, up to here, boring. It's like copying school homework from the internet, lets copy it but rewrite it in my own words.
This is basically word for word the SG-1 script. HP is there just for not being an OC or SI. Magic is non existent, basically coming up with some stupid excuse to not use it. He could have easily used it and said it was part of the experiment by Loki.
So, being very familiar with SG-1 I already know the plot, HP kinda, maybe, sometimes saves a bit of time is pointless.
6/13/2020 c40 Steele Nilsen
Yeah, the book after the da vinci code by dan brown (dont remember the nameright now). The illuminati one:)
Yeah, the book after the da vinci code by dan brown (dont remember the nameright now). The illuminati one:)
6/12/2020 c34 Steele Nilsen
Sometimes a cliffie is OK, and good writing. What I dont like is those who use cliffies in every chapter, and then abandon the story. This story is finished, so the cliffie will be resolved by the click of «next» just to the right:)
Sometimes a cliffie is OK, and good writing. What I dont like is those who use cliffies in every chapter, and then abandon the story. This story is finished, so the cliffie will be resolved by the click of «next» just to the right:)
7/30/2019 c28 
2kirosyamcha
i always assumed the tollan destroyed their own tech before they were completely wiped out or something along that line
2kirosyamchai always assumed the tollan destroyed their own tech before they were completely wiped out or something along that line
5/23/2019 c1 riddikid
The people who are mad at phoenixstave honestly cofuse me since all /PS is trying to do is give credit to the original auther and even states who the original auther is IN THE TITLE when for watever reason the original story was deleated from the authors page whereas someone else actualy tried passing the work off as their own. The ones that sayI thought i read this before. shamefull" confuse me even more and cause me to question their inteligence since phoenixstave says who the original auther is in the title and further says that its his story in the sumary THE TWO THINGS YOU READ FIRST.
The people who are mad at phoenixstave honestly cofuse me since all /PS is trying to do is give credit to the original auther and even states who the original auther is IN THE TITLE when for watever reason the original story was deleated from the authors page whereas someone else actualy tried passing the work off as their own. The ones that sayI thought i read this before. shamefull" confuse me even more and cause me to question their inteligence since phoenixstave says who the original auther is in the title and further says that its his story in the sumary THE TWO THINGS YOU READ FIRST.