for Harry Potter: An Ancient's Journey By keiranhalcyon20109/19/2017 c44 dragunpfeonyx
Dis war eine sehr gute und durch dachte geschichte die mir fiel Spas gegeben hatt sie zu warum hört sie auf Eigentlich müsste sie noch weiter gehen oder sehe ich das Falsch?
Dis war eine sehr gute und durch dachte geschichte die mir fiel Spas gegeben hatt sie zu warum hört sie auf Eigentlich müsste sie noch weiter gehen oder sehe ich das Falsch?
3/15/2017 c15 
13Mystic Sharman
You are not allowed to have a paradoxal duality. Ether clone Harry follows HP canon nigh-on perfectly I.e. Kills voldy for good before dying. Or real Harry reintegrates into magical society from the get go! There is NO third option.
13Mystic SharmanYou are not allowed to have a paradoxal duality. Ether clone Harry follows HP canon nigh-on perfectly I.e. Kills voldy for good before dying. Or real Harry reintegrates into magical society from the get go! There is NO third option.
3/15/2017 c3 Mystic Sharman
Omni-cluck-a-boom. Is what you just did with this chapter. As in thy cowardly attempt to justify your story's catalyst you clusterfucked BOTH sides of the crossover. You could of used the hyper justifiable salustion the of merging Harry prime with his clone. His magic dealing with any difficulties that the Asgard couldn't fully mitigate. Heck Thor could accept an offer made by Harry of him helping them during the summer holidays between school years. That way you get a vastly more believable HP/Stargate crossover. Heck the single only justification of Harry not being de-aged back to his proper age and rejoining earth. Is to have Thor beam up ALL magical knowledge on earth and pump it into Harry's head. Therefore removing Harry's need for a magical education.
Omni-cluck-a-boom. Is what you just did with this chapter. As in thy cowardly attempt to justify your story's catalyst you clusterfucked BOTH sides of the crossover. You could of used the hyper justifiable salustion the of merging Harry prime with his clone. His magic dealing with any difficulties that the Asgard couldn't fully mitigate. Heck Thor could accept an offer made by Harry of him helping them during the summer holidays between school years. That way you get a vastly more believable HP/Stargate crossover. Heck the single only justification of Harry not being de-aged back to his proper age and rejoining earth. Is to have Thor beam up ALL magical knowledge on earth and pump it into Harry's head. Therefore removing Harry's need for a magical education.
9/29/2016 c31 Guest
I remember an SG1 story where Daniel helped rescue Egeria and I think it was the Asgard that cloned her.
I remember an SG1 story where Daniel helped rescue Egeria and I think it was the Asgard that cloned her.
10/1/2016 c44 3WhiteElfElder
Where and whom are they off to attack with such a large fleet? I noticed there was not mention of the one place that the "Mayor" of the land used a Lantean outpost weapons to keep control.
3WhiteElfElderWhere and whom are they off to attack with such a large fleet? I noticed there was not mention of the one place that the "Mayor" of the land used a Lantean outpost weapons to keep control.
9/29/2016 c34 WhiteElfElder
I think the NID are messing around and now they have made it personal for Harry...which means they are going to all die!
I think the NID are messing around and now they have made it personal for Harry...which means they are going to all die!
9/25/2016 c23 WhiteElfElder
I like the changes to the ship as it will hopefully make it last longer. How will that effect the later trip that Sam gets a concussion on due to the "cloud" and alien ship? Now Earth has a much closer mining point.
I like the changes to the ship as it will hopefully make it last longer. How will that effect the later trip that Sam gets a concussion on due to the "cloud" and alien ship? Now Earth has a much closer mining point.
9/25/2016 c22 WhiteElfElder
Unless you destroy the body utterly into ash, never assume a Goa'uld is really dead.
Unless you destroy the body utterly into ash, never assume a Goa'uld is really dead.
9/25/2016 c21 WhiteElfElder
I wonder why Harry did not bring his wife's ship with him, he could have slaved it to his ship and acted as one to rescue more people and destroy more Goa'uld?
I wonder why Harry did not bring his wife's ship with him, he could have slaved it to his ship and acted as one to rescue more people and destroy more Goa'uld?
9/25/2016 c14 WhiteElfElder
I love how that all played out...convenient for Apophis to get to the Ida galaxy.
I love how that all played out...convenient for Apophis to get to the Ida galaxy.
9/25/2016 c13 WhiteElfElder
What they need are the names off the top of the NID and for Harry to fall back on his specialty.
What they need are the names off the top of the NID and for Harry to fall back on his specialty.