for Salt Water12/29/2023 c1 Guest
I would have loved to see more of this, this is gorgeous. I especially like the glass metaphor for weak smiles. Have a lovely day if you see this, thank you for your work!
I would have loved to see more of this, this is gorgeous. I especially like the glass metaphor for weak smiles. Have a lovely day if you see this, thank you for your work!
10/20/2018 c1 read a rainbow
This is so beautiful. I love how I know exactly who you’re talking about each time, even though you don’t use names. Your descriptions are evocative and I love the repeated usage of chasing monkeys and the subtle symbolism in it.
This is so beautiful. I love how I know exactly who you’re talking about each time, even though you don’t use names. Your descriptions are evocative and I love the repeated usage of chasing monkeys and the subtle symbolism in it.
8/14/2015 c1 
23Wordlet
I saw that you might be making a comparison piece, and I really really hope you do because this is beyond amazing, dude this is so on my favorites I LOVE his piece, I'm crying darn it! Love this, a lot. :')
23WordletI saw that you might be making a comparison piece, and I really really hope you do because this is beyond amazing, dude this is so on my favorites I LOVE his piece, I'm crying darn it! Love this, a lot. :')
3/6/2015 c1 redmustarddd
Somehow, I've failed to find you earlier, and honestly, what a loss that is. Your words are so much more than, well, I suppose words, when you write them. God, you're like my Shakespeare or my Michael Zusak or my Sally Green.
Somehow, I've failed to find you earlier, and honestly, what a loss that is. Your words are so much more than, well, I suppose words, when you write them. God, you're like my Shakespeare or my Michael Zusak or my Sally Green.
11/10/2014 c1 20Lucinda M. H. Cheshir
My goodness... this story just sent shivers down my spine! The tone was absolutely perfect throughout, and I just love it so much, even if it does make me tear up a bit. Keep on writing! You're fantastic!
Lucinda
20Lucinda M. H. CheshirMy goodness... this story just sent shivers down my spine! The tone was absolutely perfect throughout, and I just love it so much, even if it does make me tear up a bit. Keep on writing! You're fantastic!
Lucinda