for Their First Thanksgiving2/7/2022 c1 Guest
Nicely written but again You make the children sound so young and immature. Children that come from large families have to grow up very quickly especially during the 1900s. You make it as if the children can't do much themselves especially during that time period. I grew up in a large family (as so did alot of my friends) by the time we 10 years old we
by ourselves could take care of everything in the house. And by the time we were 12 or thirteen we could take care of our house & property. So please be alittle but more realistic and especially if you're going to write about a large family in the 1930s or 1940s from another country!
Nicely written but again You make the children sound so young and immature. Children that come from large families have to grow up very quickly especially during the 1900s. You make it as if the children can't do much themselves especially during that time period. I grew up in a large family (as so did alot of my friends) by the time we 10 years old we
by ourselves could take care of everything in the house. And by the time we were 12 or thirteen we could take care of our house & property. So please be alittle but more realistic and especially if you're going to write about a large family in the 1930s or 1940s from another country!
7/11/2016 c1 threebirdsnz
It made me smile. Well done
It made me smile. Well done
11/11/2014 c1 
36lemacd
ok so... wicked cute idea for a story, and the pine cone as the final ingredient, while certainly, uh... unappetizing... was certainly cute and connected this story to the one we know. i was confused by the fact that made his first wife an american named Margaret, but then i don't think Agathe's name is actually said in the play or movie (i could be wrong) so perhaps that is why. I mix so much of the real story with the fictional one when I write I forget that not everyone writes with both fact and movie canon in mind.
yes, make mine pine cone on the side, please.
36lemacdok so... wicked cute idea for a story, and the pine cone as the final ingredient, while certainly, uh... unappetizing... was certainly cute and connected this story to the one we know. i was confused by the fact that made his first wife an american named Margaret, but then i don't think Agathe's name is actually said in the play or movie (i could be wrong) so perhaps that is why. I mix so much of the real story with the fictional one when I write I forget that not everyone writes with both fact and movie canon in mind.
yes, make mine pine cone on the side, please.