
1/18/2023 c1
6littlepippag
Ooooh, i really liked that! Does anyone have any recommendations for something similar? Great writing!

Ooooh, i really liked that! Does anyone have any recommendations for something similar? Great writing!
2/22/2015 c1
273Emmeebee
Wow, I'd never noticed that either. That was really cool! (And makes sense; I mean, what else would you call Harry?) I'll try to catch it next time I watch the movie; fairly certain it wasn't in the book, though. I liked how you looked at it from the Order's perspective; from canon, we just know that they're contacted and mobilise, but it was interesting to consider what they were doing before and after they received word, and what they thought was happening. It was a little heartbreaking to think of Remus saying goodbye to Teddy with the knowledge that there was a good chance he wouldn't be making it back, and of Tonks agreeing to stay behind but then deciding that the risk is worth it later.
Just a note, though, your punctuation was often on the wrong side of the quotation marks, e.g. "I'm saying something", the speaker said. rather than "I'm saying something," the speaker said.

Wow, I'd never noticed that either. That was really cool! (And makes sense; I mean, what else would you call Harry?) I'll try to catch it next time I watch the movie; fairly certain it wasn't in the book, though. I liked how you looked at it from the Order's perspective; from canon, we just know that they're contacted and mobilise, but it was interesting to consider what they were doing before and after they received word, and what they thought was happening. It was a little heartbreaking to think of Remus saying goodbye to Teddy with the knowledge that there was a good chance he wouldn't be making it back, and of Tonks agreeing to stay behind but then deciding that the risk is worth it later.
Just a note, though, your punctuation was often on the wrong side of the quotation marks, e.g. "I'm saying something", the speaker said. rather than "I'm saying something," the speaker said.