for Some things never change1/9/2017 c8 The Emotionless Swordsman
Bravo!, Encore!, Lol!, and all of those other encouraging words. Great chapter and story! Plz keep it up!
Bravo!, Encore!, Lol!, and all of those other encouraging words. Great chapter and story! Plz keep it up!
2/22/2016 c8 
6ChaosHorizon
this was actually pretty fun and funny to read. its got just the right amount of humor and action in it. keep it up and i hope to see more soon. or however long it takes to update
6ChaosHorizonthis was actually pretty fun and funny to read. its got just the right amount of humor and action in it. keep it up and i hope to see more soon. or however long it takes to update
8/15/2015 c8 Guest
I greatly enjoyed this Chapter, but can you continue the Second Chances story, like keep it the exact same, just continue it please, it would mean the world to me. Keep up the great work. Goodbye.
I greatly enjoyed this Chapter, but can you continue the Second Chances story, like keep it the exact same, just continue it please, it would mean the world to me. Keep up the great work. Goodbye.
8/15/2015 c8 Guest
You are doing a great job with this story and I want you to continue the great work my Friend, but I do wish that you continue your old story on your new account, Second Chances. If you can it will mean a lot to me, but in the mean time, keep on writing. Goodbye.
You are doing a great job with this story and I want you to continue the great work my Friend, but I do wish that you continue your old story on your new account, Second Chances. If you can it will mean a lot to me, but in the mean time, keep on writing. Goodbye.
4/17/2015 c2 Guest
Like the idea of two minds one body
Like the idea of two minds one body
4/17/2015 c8 Xeno
Grate so far hope sarah gets turned into a xenomorphe
Grate so far hope sarah gets turned into a xenomorphe
4/18/2015 c8 JustCallMeVital
I'm so glad to see another update from you. I sit here waiting for the next.
I'm so glad to see another update from you. I sit here waiting for the next.
2/16/2015 c7 JustCallMeVital
Hey sorry for the late review. I'm (of course) hooked in this series and I can't wait to see where you take it.
Hey sorry for the late review. I'm (of course) hooked in this series and I can't wait to see where you take it.
2/7/2015 c7 3Zoommerfish
Ilike some concepts here, but you need you need to add some twist, like the fact why Caleb and Hades can't mentally hear the queen mother (original infestation site implies homeplanet) also predators would be a good addition
3ZoommerfishIlike some concepts here, but you need you need to add some twist, like the fact why Caleb and Hades can't mentally hear the queen mother (original infestation site implies homeplanet) also predators would be a good addition
2/1/2015 c7 Guest
Yet another great chapter
Yet another great chapter
1/29/2015 c7 5InfamousVenous
So... My review for the entire chapter 6, not just chapter 6 or 7. I enjoyed it. There's really nothing much more to say. I enjoy reading it, and can't wait to see more! However... I'm not sure how "The Force" will come into play... Could he choke people without touching them!? I'm just kidding... Why so serious?
5InfamousVenousSo... My review for the entire chapter 6, not just chapter 6 or 7. I enjoyed it. There's really nothing much more to say. I enjoy reading it, and can't wait to see more! However... I'm not sure how "The Force" will come into play... Could he choke people without touching them!? I'm just kidding... Why so serious?
1/29/2015 c7 1Ten-X Legacy
It would be better to spell "ETA" "E.T.A." Because the following words were also capitals.
E.T.A. Stands for Estimated Time of Arrival. It's an abbreviation.
"Strawberry, Do your job!" (jk)
As for the plot development... Wow.. gg
Kthxbai
1Ten-X LegacyIt would be better to spell "ETA" "E.T.A." Because the following words were also capitals.
E.T.A. Stands for Estimated Time of Arrival. It's an abbreviation.
"Strawberry, Do your job!" (jk)
As for the plot development... Wow.. gg
Kthxbai
1/13/2015 c5 hearthorns
Livening the story so far! And as you requests for help; if you still Ned it. You can contact me at hearthorns gmail . Com! Hope you are fairing well in wiritig this story, don't die on us.. YET.
Livening the story so far! And as you requests for help; if you still Ned it. You can contact me at hearthorns gmail . Com! Hope you are fairing well in wiritig this story, don't die on us.. YET.
1/12/2015 c5 Guest
I am on my mobile device, not able to create my account, but I have been reading AvP fan fiction and this is one of the best. I could help edit and beta read ( basicly same thing ). You can contact me at my writing email; . I have plenty of time on my hands.
I am on my mobile device, not able to create my account, but I have been reading AvP fan fiction and this is one of the best. I could help edit and beta read ( basicly same thing ). You can contact me at my writing email; . I have plenty of time on my hands.