
7/2/2019 c1
1Alwyn18
Hi there! Alwyn18 here! Love this chapter! It’s really fascinating to read the interactions between the two as they play out.
Well done!
I would love to read more.

Hi there! Alwyn18 here! Love this chapter! It’s really fascinating to read the interactions between the two as they play out.
Well done!
I would love to read more.
11/17/2014 c1
4EStrunk
Love this. Wish you would make it into the beginning of a story. I particularly like the dialogue. They felt in character, even as they warmed toward each other. I like that Hermione stayed skeptical, despite her thoughts which were running ahead of her. The lurching from polite to snarky was funny, but also seemed real.

Love this. Wish you would make it into the beginning of a story. I particularly like the dialogue. They felt in character, even as they warmed toward each other. I like that Hermione stayed skeptical, despite her thoughts which were running ahead of her. The lurching from polite to snarky was funny, but also seemed real.