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1/22 c1 JadeRovks
Hey UODAT3
6/19/2017 c1 3hevenlydemonknight
Need more
7/5/2016 c1 chris
keepu the good work
12/31/2015 c1 crescent the eclipse
Are you going to continue this? It has so much potential that it isn't even funny, it would be a shame that it doesn't continue
9/20/2015 c1 condie2013
Quite good keep it up
7/5/2015 c1 Telron
interesting idea and good so far
4/5/2015 c1 2senselessgrinder
If this is still open to review, the idea is sound in my own opinion but it comes down to what you want to get out of this story.
1/7/2015 c1 Carlthompson
ok when is the next chapter coming out
11/16/2014 c1 11Konerok Hadorak
I think I see where you're starting from in this story, but I'll be honest, as a pilot chapter, I expected a bit more clarity and fluidity, but instead the chapter was very disjointed and strange. Delving into some of the backstory of her current situation would be nice, like how her and Quinn got in the prison in the first place, who exactly her Sith enemy is, etc.

You have a good idea here, especially since Bleach Star Wars stories aren't common, and commonly don't have a good story basis. I look forward to your next chapter!

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