for Lie, Cry, Deny1/21/2019 c1 Guest
Oh god... this hurts so much... I wanted my nejiten ToT
Oh god... this hurts so much... I wanted my nejiten ToT
6/15/2017 c1 
11Mizhera
I cried. *insert incoherent wailing here* Seriously, you really did a good job in expressing Tenten's emotions. *sniffs* It's like, I was feeling it, too, *sniffs* as I read the story. It's so heartbreaking. Thank you for the fic. These two really need more love. *more sobbing here*
11MizheraI cried. *insert incoherent wailing here* Seriously, you really did a good job in expressing Tenten's emotions. *sniffs* It's like, I was feeling it, too, *sniffs* as I read the story. It's so heartbreaking. Thank you for the fic. These two really need more love. *more sobbing here*
6/17/2015 c1 DMHG
Wow, that was something. A very fresh story idea (to me, at least), and I love it even though I'm a sucker for happy endings. And the part with Kiba seemed very in character and all the feelings were right. One of the best NejiTen fiction I have ever read :)
Wow, that was something. A very fresh story idea (to me, at least), and I love it even though I'm a sucker for happy endings. And the part with Kiba seemed very in character and all the feelings were right. One of the best NejiTen fiction I have ever read :)
3/26/2015 c1 21Maayou
God that was good. Finally someone who share my mind about how Tenten is supposed to react about the dead of Neji. I'm currently writing something similar as that and I'm content to see that I'm not the only one who picture Tenten being angry about his death. About the way he, again, has to sacrifice himself for the main branch. Thanks you for this.
21MaayouGod that was good. Finally someone who share my mind about how Tenten is supposed to react about the dead of Neji. I'm currently writing something similar as that and I'm content to see that I'm not the only one who picture Tenten being angry about his death. About the way he, again, has to sacrifice himself for the main branch. Thanks you for this.
11/25/2014 c1 22Fearless Rider
It's been two years and we should all be over Neji but fics like this bring it all back. I love Nejiten and this is a wonderful portrayal of their relationship and of Tenten. Love it.
22Fearless RiderIt's been two years and we should all be over Neji but fics like this bring it all back. I love Nejiten and this is a wonderful portrayal of their relationship and of Tenten. Love it.
11/23/2014 c1 104KNO
Just perf. I loved all of the emotions you conveyed, and that primarily, anger/hurt was the primary one over sadness.
Wonderful writing
KNO
104KNOJust perf. I loved all of the emotions you conveyed, and that primarily, anger/hurt was the primary one over sadness.
Wonderful writing
KNO
11/21/2014 c1 14enigmatic.typewriter
This made me hate Kishimoto just a bit more :) beautifully written!
14enigmatic.typewriterThis made me hate Kishimoto just a bit more :) beautifully written!