for The Winter Queen8/31/2015 c5 
22Rainezeik
This story is good to read. Aside from
The grammatical errors but its fine. I read ur story and i love it :)
22RainezeikThis story is good to read. Aside from
The grammatical errors but its fine. I read ur story and i love it :)
2/13/2015 c1 2Scorpio05
Hello! thanks for the comments. And yup, I have a beta reader is my talented friend Whackabee1, but he is helping me with Loving my sister. He has his own fics, and his daily activities so I don't want to overburdening him.
On the next chapters we will see them at last! in bed.
2Scorpio05Hello! thanks for the comments. And yup, I have a beta reader is my talented friend Whackabee1, but he is helping me with Loving my sister. He has his own fics, and his daily activities so I don't want to overburdening him.
On the next chapters we will see them at last! in bed.
2/12/2015 c5 elsaisabadass
hi there! this chap is so hilarious, poor Elsa, her destiny is be a awkward queen forever, when is about love, in this case bed arrangements XDXDXD
Keep going, nice style of writing and short chap, too short for my taste but is your story so nevermind... Also there's no ortografic or gramatical errors so far, do you have a beta reader?
Lucky me, i don't miss dinner, NEVER
Waiting for your next update, see you later!
hi there! this chap is so hilarious, poor Elsa, her destiny is be a awkward queen forever, when is about love, in this case bed arrangements XDXDXD
Keep going, nice style of writing and short chap, too short for my taste but is your story so nevermind... Also there's no ortografic or gramatical errors so far, do you have a beta reader?
Lucky me, i don't miss dinner, NEVER
Waiting for your next update, see you later!
2/12/2015 c5 12FrankySuperCyborg21
Well they hurry up and spend the night as a married couple! Is starting to get frustrating!
12FrankySuperCyborg21Well they hurry up and spend the night as a married couple! Is starting to get frustrating!
1/11/2015 c1 smilingpuddle
Wow. This was very good. And, I thought, so original. Very interesting and enjoyable. Thank you for writing.
Wow. This was very good. And, I thought, so original. Very interesting and enjoyable. Thank you for writing.