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9/23 c25 Sword'sfunPen'sbetter8P
Why'd this Die?
5/4 c25 19crocket
cool
4/15 c25 Balagor
While I realize I am finding this almost a year after the last update, I hope that it will get more updates. The author is clearly trying to keep the 2 halves somewhat balanced, and does not seem to be into just rehashing the same story with a new character.
4/6 c4 Guest
You're making up a bunch of weird shit for no reason other than to stick it to another writer? Hard pass.
3/1 c3 confusedw00kie
The word you were looking for when Luna ignored the attack with a carefree air is not nonplussed. Nonplussed is another way of saying shocked. It means to be so confused and surprised as to not know how to react. Nonchalant could work. Unphased could work as well
2/5 c25 Marik132
Love this story read it all, please please please tell me that you have a future update available for this amazing story.
9/8/2019 c1 Guest
how can this be based on lighting among the stars if you never read it so have no idea what it was about.
8/21/2019 c25 yahska
Based on the self absorbed monologue at the start of the fic I thought this was going to be better than LatS. Maybe a bit more realistic but it's a sci fi fanfic so it is not that important. If I had to rate it it's a bit low on enjoyment factor than LatS that's the only factor I'm considering in a fanfic (original authors did the rest for you)
8/15/2019 c1 NazgulBelserion
Ok so review was ok at start too much talking imo and worst part for me is that it's still same universe wish they landed in a verse without other magicals cause its always same in other stories magicals still hiding and shit and blah blah plus makes whole making new magical asari babies less special if there are other magicals in the verse so ya 5/10
7/8/2019 c21 9Goodpie2
Well, we’re past the point that feels like a bad harem fix fic and that’s nice, but at the same time... dear Sithis I must be 70k words in and damn near nothing has happened. It’s made even worse by the fact that at this point the story basically consists of HINO and an armada of OCs, most of whom we haven’t seen enough of to really get to know as characters and feel like faceless redshirts with weird names.
7/8/2019 c13 Goodpie2
I’m gonna be honest, this fic is... weird. In a lot of ways, it seems like a bad harem smut fic, but without the smut? But at the same time you’ve got a lot of clever concepts that you *could* do a lot with. Except that the pacing is glacial, and I’m wondering if it’s gonna actually turn into a porn fic before we get to the societal and character interactions that I’m actually interested in.
5/30/2019 c10 1kuriboh1233
Your Luna is in the mu top 3 favorite Luna's
5/27/2019 c1 Pteaset
I like it
5/21/2019 c25 Breitve
I still ship femshep and liara :)
Looking forward to seeing more of this
Thanks for sharing
5/17/2019 c25 Uzushiogakure
Lol
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