for Only My Family11/7/2018 c1 StrangleyCami
The plot is great! I really think that you should thicken it up. Write about how Masaomi got that way, when it happened, how he did it, he has 12 other brothers wouldn't one stop him, explain why not. Really explain, go into detail. A in depth chapter on Ema's reaction sounds cool too! I think you should do more!
The plot is great! I really think that you should thicken it up. Write about how Masaomi got that way, when it happened, how he did it, he has 12 other brothers wouldn't one stop him, explain why not. Really explain, go into detail. A in depth chapter on Ema's reaction sounds cool too! I think you should do more!
2/8/2015 c1 Anna
Woah ... I was crying o.o But since Masaomi is always calm and friendly it was sooo shocking ! :00
I still liked it -
Woah ... I was crying o.o But since Masaomi is always calm and friendly it was sooo shocking ! :00
I still liked it -
12/4/2014 c1 
78Ian-the-Existential-Crisis
So short! Although the plot was good, I wish there was more. Oh well.
78Ian-the-Existential-CrisisSo short! Although the plot was good, I wish there was more. Oh well.