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1/20 c13 Prewishjay13
Are you coming home?" Bill finally asked.

Ginny glanced at Harry as he slipped his arm around her waist. She smiled softly. "We'll come to the Burrow, tomorrow or the next day," she replied.

This was subtle but well done. It made me think of her now thinking of harry as her home and the change the clock made and this reaction of her was the first confirmation she gave out loud. Subtle but well done.
1/17 c6 Prewishjay13
The fkuff us nice but the last part was a bit weird. Sounds like she wants to trap harry to have her way with his body
1/17 c13 Finnspa23
Great story!
11/6/2022 c13 Mewpagano
so good fic!
10/18/2022 c5 2EnigmaticEmperor
I like the touch that Ginny's clock hand moved.
10/18/2022 c13 EnigmaticEmperor
I love this story! One of my most favorite Hinny against the world ones.
4/28/2022 c11 Bestyreren
Do you know how Runes work? Runes are an old alphabet and doesn’t contain any specific symbols that signify different words. It’s not like Mandarin where a combination of lines create a symbol that have a specific meaning
4/28/2022 c11 Bestyreren
Do you know how Runes work? Runes are an old alphabet and doesn’t contain any specific symbols that signify different words. It’s not like Mandarin where a combination of lines create a symbol that have a specific meaning
4/25/2022 c9 Bestyreren
Um… I thought this fic began with the train ride to Hogwarts starting Harry’s sixth year. Why are Fred and George then going on the train a year later? The twins are 2 years above Harry, so already at the beginning of this fic, they would’ve been done with school
2/28/2022 c1 Truther
I just want to say that the story comes across as unfair to me. Harry just goes off believing that Ginny has rejected him. This occurence completely baffles me. She never plainly rejected Harry. All she did was insist finding a compartment with Dean as promised. While in the past if it were to be counted as such, Ginny has been rejected by Harry way more profoundly than the instance mentioned in this story. Despite that she never gave up on him. Even if Ginny had rejected him in clear terms, acceptance would have been better than just walking off like that seems way too immature. I mean James never gave up on Lily, even when her rejections were more obvious bitter and intentional- sort of makes me resent that Harry and Ginny's relationship started on such a depressing note in this story. While the canon had beautifully depicted that Harry and Ginny's love story was a one where they never gave up on each other even when their love was unrequited or they were broken up or separated by war, time and distance, this plot completely defers the emotion. While I think it's great that you can move me so greatly with mere words, I don't appreciate how this story takes a very different approach towards my otp than your other stories. It was an okay-okay story with none of the real Hinny splendor.
10/25/2021 c13 minxblades
Great Job i Would have love to know if Traveller was Flamel or Merlin ?
10/25/2021 c11 minxblades
I love the fact they match!
10/25/2021 c9 minxblades
hmmm now what 2 peeps seen them what will happen now?
10/25/2021 c4 minxblades
Love this story its awesome. Now if Lucy would just die.
10/25/2021 c3 minxblades
Poor Voldy shorts getting his arse handed to him by teenager
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