for Haven in Hell8/8/2016 c1 
2Nairil
Well, chapter 1 is so angsty...It makes me hope, there were something to wake Tenten from that dark dream..would you consider writing a fic in which Neji would return or Tenten would cope with his death and find peace?
Chapter 2 on the other hand is beautiful. It is powerful and touching. Last two sentences leave feeling of fleetingness of the world. True mono no aware.
2NairilWell, chapter 1 is so angsty...It makes me hope, there were something to wake Tenten from that dark dream..would you consider writing a fic in which Neji would return or Tenten would cope with his death and find peace?
Chapter 2 on the other hand is beautiful. It is powerful and touching. Last two sentences leave feeling of fleetingness of the world. True mono no aware.
12/11/2014 c2 8akirasatsuna
sweet yet sad at the same time. I love it! I hope you'd write more nejiten because i adore them so much.
8akirasatsunasweet yet sad at the same time. I love it! I hope you'd write more nejiten because i adore them so much.
11/25/2014 c2 78Aquarius Galuxy
This was so beautiful and bittersweet at the same time... loved the descriptions and the emotions in here. Thank you for writing and sharing!
78Aquarius GaluxyThis was so beautiful and bittersweet at the same time... loved the descriptions and the emotions in here. Thank you for writing and sharing!