for Attitude Adjustment1/24/2015 c6 RachaelMaree
LOL! House mouse to the rescue! Poor Nick just keeps copping it. I really enjoyed this and as always I'm looking forward to more!
LOL! House mouse to the rescue! Poor Nick just keeps copping it. I really enjoyed this and as always I'm looking forward to more!
1/24/2015 c6 
97TinkerBella7
Loving this story. Nick purring is so funny and then OMG he does not SNORE from Hank. I thought there was something sneaky about that OJ. Great chapter.
97TinkerBella7Loving this story. Nick purring is so funny and then OMG he does not SNORE from Hank. I thought there was something sneaky about that OJ. Great chapter.
1/14/2015 c5 63general zargon
Hm, I have to say, I like the basic idea behind this story, but some of the spelling errors and misplaced punctuation detract from the story, not to mention that it's a little abrupt...I really think this story has potential though, so I encourage to keep writing it, and I wish you the best of luck with improving and writing! :)
63general zargonHm, I have to say, I like the basic idea behind this story, but some of the spelling errors and misplaced punctuation detract from the story, not to mention that it's a little abrupt...I really think this story has potential though, so I encourage to keep writing it, and I wish you the best of luck with improving and writing! :)
1/11/2015 c5 mi guard
Missing your updates
Missing your updates
12/27/2014 c5 LittleBounce
Heh, you don't need an editor! Great chapter. Love the zombie moan and persistent demand for meatballs and I love your groggy Grimm. Awww. Yeah, nice balance here between hard to permanently damage and yet being quite badly damaged nonetheless.
And you evil thing with that cliff-hanger! Hmph! Liking forward to the next bit!
You do hank and bud so nicely in this, and I love the way you've built val and sera (and the explanation for their names) into the conversation without it turning into exposition. Nicely done.
Now, I'm gonna go look up what marplot means xxxx
Heh, you don't need an editor! Great chapter. Love the zombie moan and persistent demand for meatballs and I love your groggy Grimm. Awww. Yeah, nice balance here between hard to permanently damage and yet being quite badly damaged nonetheless.
And you evil thing with that cliff-hanger! Hmph! Liking forward to the next bit!
You do hank and bud so nicely in this, and I love the way you've built val and sera (and the explanation for their names) into the conversation without it turning into exposition. Nicely done.
Now, I'm gonna go look up what marplot means xxxx
12/25/2014 c5 22D Squirrel
The out of luck code team had me laughing and laughing. Poor guys rushing in all ready to go and...nothing.
22D SquirrelThe out of luck code team had me laughing and laughing. Poor guys rushing in all ready to go and...nothing.
12/21/2014 c4 8LittleBounce
hope the who don't visit? lol! Poor Nick. ow ow ow ow ow. OW! It's a relief that his assigned doctor is cool about working with team Grimm - it would get so, so messy if they spent their entire time having to fight with the care plan. I love Hank in this. He gets a back seat in stories way too often but he's right up front here, and I love it.
It's really cool how neatly he blends in with Monroe and Rosalee, and it's nice to see team Grimm widen to incorporate Val and Sera - up to a point.
and yeah, we should all blame the cracher. For everything.
8LittleBouncehope the who don't visit? lol! Poor Nick. ow ow ow ow ow. OW! It's a relief that his assigned doctor is cool about working with team Grimm - it would get so, so messy if they spent their entire time having to fight with the care plan. I love Hank in this. He gets a back seat in stories way too often but he's right up front here, and I love it.
It's really cool how neatly he blends in with Monroe and Rosalee, and it's nice to see team Grimm widen to incorporate Val and Sera - up to a point.
and yeah, we should all blame the cracher. For everything.