Reviews: Darke Chocolate

4/1/2018 c1 Me
BBWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OH MY GOD THIS IS GREAT! I CANT STOP LAUGHING! AHAHAHAHAHAHA!

12/11/2017 c1 Tawny613
Go with proud, it's more Simons style. That is, grudging respect.

8/29/2017 c1 Guest
Oh my god this should have happened yes

6/15/2015 c1 Guest
Haha! Wonderful idea. Well done.

4/25/2015 c1

5Apollo Holmes
Oh my god, this is hilarious. I finally found someone else who has heard of Septimus Heap, awesome! Oh, and the Secrets of the Immortal Nicholas Flamel, it seems.

4/12/2015 c1

21Buffintruder
That definitely should have happened in the book. I like how you write Simon's POV; he's not completely evil and still is affected by growing up with Jenna, but at the same time, he isn't really good. This is very funny.

1/9/2015 c1

9ckphrasis
Ha ha. Now he's judging. This was great! You know if jenna had done that in the books... it woulda saved tons a lives. You are a genius!

1/1/2015 c1

5sylvia-of-wings
This is amazing!

12/13/2014 c1

17Epsilon Scorpii
Hahaha very good point xD short and funny too!

12/2/2014 c1

1VividPhox
You have kept Simon and Jenna perfectly in character while making it funny and light hearted at the same time. I would love to see a sequel or something, this is a gem

11/26/2014 c1

10xxmelusinexx
Perfect! Oh man that's hilarious! Love it.

11/25/2014 c1

25angelslaugh
wow...nice. I never realized that, myself. Still. Pretty nice! I loved it!

11/25/2014 c1

4truthed
This is fantastic! I never thought of this use of the chocolate charm. This would have solved sooo many problems for them. Ok, at first I was wondering if Jenna was going to turn Simon into chocolate. I'm glad she didn't though! The characters are very well done too.