for Lost Love2/21/2015 c11 Guest
I really think that it would be better if you took the time to re-read and edit your work before posting. In this chapter you alternated with the active and passive voice, and that made reading this difficult and confusing. However, I do enjoy the direction of this story and will continue reading. Please don't be discouraged by my suggestions. The story is FANTASTIC and I need to know what happens next.
I really think that it would be better if you took the time to re-read and edit your work before posting. In this chapter you alternated with the active and passive voice, and that made reading this difficult and confusing. However, I do enjoy the direction of this story and will continue reading. Please don't be discouraged by my suggestions. The story is FANTASTIC and I need to know what happens next.
162/8/2015 c1 Jenna zabala
When are you going to write more please don't stop wiriting it's getting really good
When are you going to write more please don't stop wiriting it's getting really good
1/29/2015 c10 Guest
I'm waiting for the next chapter and can't wait for the Gale smackdown! !-Angel
I'm waiting for the next chapter and can't wait for the Gale smackdown! !-Angel
1/14/2015 c8 jenna zabala
When are you going to write more
When are you going to write more
1/9/2015 c8 wolflover43
Love the last two chapters! Katniss is finally remembering! Her memory loss was going to drive me insane! I just wanted to shout at my phone! Tell her that Peeta is her true love! Not Gale! No offense to him, but Katniss is Peeta's and Peeta is Katniss'. Sorry about the rant. Anyway...
Upadate soon! And sorry I didn't sign in!
wolflover43 (signed out)
Love the last two chapters! Katniss is finally remembering! Her memory loss was going to drive me insane! I just wanted to shout at my phone! Tell her that Peeta is her true love! Not Gale! No offense to him, but Katniss is Peeta's and Peeta is Katniss'. Sorry about the rant. Anyway...
Upadate soon! And sorry I didn't sign in!
wolflover43 (signed out)
1/8/2015 c8 paige.johnson.5661
Keep going I showed my friend your stories
And she loves them to death every time I talk
To her that's all we can talk about well that and josh hutcherson and jeninfer Lawrence I love your stories so much keep going l
Keep going I showed my friend your stories
And she loves them to death every time I talk
To her that's all we can talk about well that and josh hutcherson and jeninfer Lawrence I love your stories so much keep going l
1/8/2015 c8 Guest
Amazing! Please update!
Amazing! Please update!
1/8/2015 c8 Guest
Finally! she remembered! I wonder what problems gale might cause her...
Finally! she remembered! I wonder what problems gale might cause her...
1/6/2015 c2 rihdaria
Very quickly, Katniss and Peeta they met. I hope that the action will not be too fast and a little know the characters, but overall it is a great.
Very quickly, Katniss and Peeta they met. I hope that the action will not be too fast and a little know the characters, but overall it is a great.
1/5/2015 c5 Jenna Zabala
Are you going to write some more
Are you going to write some more
12/21/2014 c5 wolflover43
I-I don't know how to convey my feelings for this chapter...and that's not a bad thing. This chapter was really good. That's all I know what to say. All I can manage to say.
And well...drama is going down now! And uh oh. Gale you better run for your life. Don't want a mad Katniss in the same room as you rightly? Haha! Kidding. But I like this chapter and hope you update soon! And Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!
I-I don't know how to convey my feelings for this chapter...and that's not a bad thing. This chapter was really good. That's all I know what to say. All I can manage to say.
And well...drama is going down now! And uh oh. Gale you better run for your life. Don't want a mad Katniss in the same room as you rightly? Haha! Kidding. But I like this chapter and hope you update soon! And Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!
12/17/2014 c5 Guest
Ugh why?! Please PLEASE more so good!
Ugh why?! Please PLEASE more so good!