
3/5/2020 c6
17tyrannicpuppy
The end is a little brief and Snape doesn't get his, but otherwise, this was great.

The end is a little brief and Snape doesn't get his, but otherwise, this was great.
12/26/2019 c1 BRonze
In a way, a lucid Luna Lovegood is so much more scarier than a loony one! She makes a whole lot of sense and you know damn well she won't eat everything in sight! Now Dudley has changed drastically! But then he now has something to fight for. This is what I'd expect from a Muggle-born or Muggle-raised. Instead of running around with sticks and shooting magic at their enemies they go and get guns to deal with the Death Eaters. Now if Dudley makes use of all the knowledge he got from watching war movies they won't just get guns. They get Claymores as well. Set two up on either side of a doorway with a door that opens away from them and towards the enemy and you've got a lovely mess.
In a way, a lucid Luna Lovegood is so much more scarier than a loony one! She makes a whole lot of sense and you know damn well she won't eat everything in sight! Now Dudley has changed drastically! But then he now has something to fight for. This is what I'd expect from a Muggle-born or Muggle-raised. Instead of running around with sticks and shooting magic at their enemies they go and get guns to deal with the Death Eaters. Now if Dudley makes use of all the knowledge he got from watching war movies they won't just get guns. They get Claymores as well. Set two up on either side of a doorway with a door that opens away from them and towards the enemy and you've got a lovely mess.
9/8/2019 c6
8HarryPotterFangirl85
I like it. Now if only I could find a similar story that is more of a novel length that I haven’t read yet...

I like it. Now if only I could find a similar story that is more of a novel length that I haven’t read yet...
3/9/2019 c4 suziq968
Maybe if you'd made this a time travel it would work but you keep giving them all this knowledge with no explanation of how they got it which really ruins it.
Maybe if you'd made this a time travel it would work but you keep giving them all this knowledge with no explanation of how they got it which really ruins it.
8/2/2018 c5 Guest
All your stories are very well done.
All your stories are very well done.
9/1/2017 c6 Guest
love it!
love it!